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Wed Sep 02, 2015 3:39 am
elysian says...



Hello - I see you're needing a review, you've come to the right place!

Here's just some information about my reviewing style and so forth:

Things I WILL review:

Spoiler! :
GENRES:

Science Fiction
Historical Fiction
Fantasy
Romance
*Teen Fiction
mysteries
Action/Adventures

LITERARY TYPES:

*Lyrics
Novels
Poetry
Short Story

*Only if you really need me to...


Things I WILL NOT review:

Spoiler! :
GENRES:

Culture
Fanfiction
Film
Health
Politics
Review
Science
Spiritual

LITERARY TYPES:

Art
Articles
Script


What must I do to repay you for reviewing my work?

your soul Nothing, really :-) If you would like to return a review, that would be great! But I do not require anything :p

How do I request a review from you?

Well, just copy and paste a link to the work you would like to be reviewed below, and if you have a certain thing you'd like me to look for or critique on (i.e : detailed vs. overview, character-focused vs. plot-focused, etc.)


LET'S GET TO IT THEN :-)
elysian: (adj.) beautiful or creative; divinely inspired; peaceful and perfect.

formally lylas.
  





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Wed Sep 02, 2015 4:46 am
yizhongt says...



Hey there, could you please review:

Chalice of Life: Chapter 7

and

Chalice of Life: Chapter 8

Thanks in advance!
  





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Wed Sep 02, 2015 2:25 pm
elysian says...



@yizhongt

Would you like me to start from the beginning, or just review those two chapters?
elysian: (adj.) beautiful or creative; divinely inspired; peaceful and perfect.

formally lylas.
  





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Wed Sep 02, 2015 2:41 pm
yizhongt says...



@lylas, it would be great if you could drop a review from the beginning, but if you don't have the time, the last two are just fine
  





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Wed Sep 02, 2015 4:02 pm
elysian says...



Okay! I'll try and read from the beginning, just know it'll take me some time to get through to chapter 7-8!

@yizhongt
elysian: (adj.) beautiful or creative; divinely inspired; peaceful and perfect.

formally lylas.
  





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Fri Sep 11, 2015 2:54 pm
plathonstone says...



could you review my poem please?

Mother, mother
  





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Fri Sep 11, 2015 4:03 pm
elysian says...



I'll try to get to it Monday! I'm going camping this weekend, but hopefully I'll get to it!
elysian: (adj.) beautiful or creative; divinely inspired; peaceful and perfect.

formally lylas.
  





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Fri Sep 11, 2015 5:12 pm
One says...



HI would you please review my work The Ripper ? Who is that ? (chapter 1) (there is also a 2nd chapter ) and thanks
  





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Mon Sep 14, 2015 2:20 am
elysian says...



I'll try and get to it tomorrow after I do @plathonstone 's request. (I keep forgetting I have to tag people so they get a notify)

@One
elysian: (adj.) beautiful or creative; divinely inspired; peaceful and perfect.

formally lylas.
  





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Wed Sep 16, 2015 12:09 pm
Mikons3 says...



When you'll have some time to spare please review this piece.

Ludwig. (chapter 2)

This is second chapter. I think it would be better for critique if you read first one as well (400+ words).
Thank you in advance.
  





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Wed Dec 02, 2015 11:28 am
felistia says...



Hi, could you please review my poem called The Sands of Time. :D :D
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/The-Sands-of-Time-125340
  





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Thu Dec 10, 2015 10:55 pm
felistia says...



Hi Felistia here, I would love if you could review my story. I need someone to review all the chapters. Most people only read the first three. It seem a bit boring in the beginning, but it gets better as you get into it. Please can you go through and read all the chapters. :D :D
It is called Search for the Ruby of Fire and is a fantasy\ action adventure\ a bit fan fiction, not really it's there because the story has something's similar to the Wings of Fire. It has dragons as the main characters and won't give away anymore. It has no 16, 18, L, M, V tags just to let you know. Here is the link. :D :D :D
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Search-for-the-Ruby-of-Fire-Chapter-1-124445
  





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Fri Dec 11, 2015 3:13 am
elysian says...



@felistia, I might be able to do a general review on one of the chapters, but I'm severely busy right now and I don't think I have enough time to be reviewing a whole novel, sorry :-(
elysian: (adj.) beautiful or creative; divinely inspired; peaceful and perfect.

formally lylas.
  





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Fri Dec 11, 2015 3:59 am
felistia says...



okay. :D
  








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