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Mon Sep 21, 2015 11:30 am
Duncan says...



Hi! Would you mind reviewing Two Spectrums?
Thanks so much! :)
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Mon Sep 21, 2015 11:15 pm
ParanormalMyth says...



Everyone's reviews are done!
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@Duncan
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Fri Oct 02, 2015 11:37 pm
yizhongt says...



Hey there, could you review:

Chalice of Life: Chapter 10 (Part 1)

Thanks in advance !
  





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Fri Oct 02, 2015 11:45 pm
ParanormalMyth says...



@yizhongt Of Course! I should have that done by tomorrow at the latest. :)
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Sat Oct 03, 2015 1:02 am
Firelight says...



Hi there! I was wondering if you would be so kind as to review either chapter 3 or 4 of my novel The Unsinkable Disaster? I know you probably haven't read the other chapters but I'm just starting it up after a bit of a break and need a little help with getting some reviews :)

Thank you!
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Sat Oct 03, 2015 1:06 am
ParanormalMyth says...



@yizhongt Your review has been posted! :)

@Firelight I would be more than happy too! I'll read through the other chapters first. :) Your review should be done tomorrow at the latest!
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Sat Oct 03, 2015 2:10 am
ParanormalMyth says...



@Firelight Your review has been posted! I hope it was helpful, even though I didn't really have much to say.
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Sat Oct 03, 2015 6:08 am
micamouth says...



Hi, could you review my latest chapter of Forgotten Fire? You don't have to read the chapters before it, though it might help you understand a bit more.
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Sat Oct 03, 2015 6:18 am
ParanormalMyth says...



@Sagitta Absolutely! I should hopefully have it done within the next 24 hours, but there's a chance my power may go out because of heavy storms. If that were to happen, my Internet would go out as well. Hopefully that won't happen though! Hope you have a great morning/evening/day/night/time, haha.
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Sat Oct 03, 2015 6:26 am
micamouth says...



You too! Thanks, and hopefully your power will stay on.
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Sat Oct 10, 2015 1:40 pm
yizhongt says...



Hey Paranormal, could you please review :

Chalice of Life: Chapter 10 (Part 2)

Thanks in advance !
  





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Mon Oct 12, 2015 1:38 am
ParanormalMyth says...



@yizhongt Ah, I didn't notice the notification before now! I should have your review done in the next 24 hours. :)
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Mon Oct 12, 2015 1:34 pm
tigeraye says...



I uploaded a few more chapters of Heartbeat Academy, eight and nine. I liked reading your other reviews so if you get a chance, I'd love your opinions on the next parts x_x

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Mon Oct 12, 2015 3:26 pm
yizhongt says...



@ParanormalMyth, take your time if you have other things on your plate at the moment.
  





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Thu Nov 05, 2015 4:33 am
felistia says...



Hi ParanormalMyth, Felistia here. I would love if you could review the novel I am writing. I have 8 chapters up, so I'll give you the link to the first part. It is a fantasy novel about dragons. I will leave more description and the link below. :D
Spoiler! :
The story is about a dragon named Zoltar and he is on a mission to save his tribe. I don't want to give away to much.


https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Search-for-the-Ruby-of-Fire-Prologue-124445
  








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