Young Writers Society

Post here with the name of the work you'd like me to review and I'll get to it within the next week! I love fantasy, and sci-fi, but I will review pretty much anything other than poetry.
I am very honest in my reviews, but I also make sure to add how you can improve, not just that you can.
My reviews are also pretty long, so if you're looking for something that doesn't delve into grammar, spelling, sentence structure, character development, content and plot (hopefully I'm not forgetting anything), I'm not the reviewer for you.

Hope to review for you soon!

Hi!

Could you review my short story, XIII?

Here's the link: XIII

Thanks in advance!

|Peter Pan|

Not sure if you're still accepting, but I'd very much like some input on a chapter.

Chasing a Ghost - Chapter 1

Will appreciate all feedback of course, but I'd appreciate a particularity on the characters, honesty of the dialogue, and general style of writing.

Cheers.

I still am accepting reviews! I posted this before I got my new job, so I haven't been on hardly at all recently, sorry about the delay!

Hi HopelessAbandon, I am Felistia and I would love if you could review the novel I am writing. I don't mind criticism at all, so critic away. It is a fantasy novel about dragons. I have left the link below.



https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Search-for-the-Ruby-of-Fire-Prologue-124445