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Wolfie Loves Novels and Short Stories



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Wed Aug 12, 2015 2:57 am
Wolfi says...



Welcome, welcome! Please, take a seat. You have a beloved chapter or short story in need of a review? Splendid! You've come to the perfect place. My name is Wolfie and I'd be happy to review one of your YWS masterpieces. You see, I'm on a never ending hunt for the evasive Revious starus, more commonly known as the Next Shiny Review Star, and each review I complete is another step closer to its hidden lair!

Naturally, I have preferences on what I like to review. To begin with, novel chapters and short stories are my favorite. From there, I have favorite genres. I'll review whatever you place in front of me, but know that I'm better at reviewing some things than others.

Genres I'm interested in...
Historical Fiction
Action/Adventure
Mystery/Suspense
Spiritual (as in religion)
Fantasy

What I'm not interested in...
Poetry (I wouldn't be of much help to you, most likely, but I will still review if you'd like)
Lyrics
Dark Fantasy (devils, demons vs angels, underworld...)
Most fanfiction (ask me)
Anything rated 18+ (but violence is okay)

If you'd like a review...
Please include a link to the work you'd like me to read and any other information you'd like me to know. If you want a review on a chapter that's further into the book, I'd appreciate some sort of summary of the chapters before it so I know what's going on. For any review, you can also include what you'd like specific help with in your work. Descriptions? Characters? Plot? Dialogue? You name it.

I'm human (in case you didn't know)...
...so I can't always read and review your pieces right after you post them. I'll try my best to review as quickly and as efficiently as I can, but one thing I can promise you is this: by the end of the next Review Day, I will have finished all the requested reviews. I can usually guarantee, however, that you will receive your review within two days.

Until then, adios!
Last edited by Wolfi on Mon Jan 18, 2016 8:49 am, edited 3 times in total.
John 14:27:
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.
  





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Thu Aug 13, 2015 8:37 pm
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Mikons3 says...



Well then, let me be first here to ask you to review prologue and first chapter of my action/adventure fantasy Monster Hunt.
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Mikons3/Monster-Hunt-122929

I tried to blend in first person narration from a pov character with intervention of so called objective narrator, in order to juxtapose both and flesh out inconsistencies of character. (subjective narration). I would like you to comment on to what degree I achieved what I was aiming for, or if I did at all, it's up to you to decide. I can take critique so please don't hesitate to fully criticize every inch of my writing. Thank you a lot!

it is 5.5k words btw :twisted:
  





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Fri Aug 14, 2015 7:16 am
Wolfi says...



Done! :)
John 14:27:
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.
  





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Sun Aug 16, 2015 2:47 am
Wolfi says...



@Lovetswift1300, it looks like you have your work saved as a draft and I can't view it. Let me know when you republish it. :)
John 14:27:
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.
  





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Mon Aug 17, 2015 5:31 pm
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Lightsong says...



Please save this chapter from the Green Room. :) When Dream and Reality Collide [Chapter 1.0]
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Wed Aug 19, 2015 5:52 am
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@Lightsong, sorry for taking longer than usual! I recently finished an earlier requested review and only have had time to read your chapter thus far. The review will be completed by tomorrow. :)
John 14:27:
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.
  





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Wed Aug 19, 2015 6:04 am
Lightsong says...



@Wolfie36: it's okay, take your time. :)
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Thu Aug 20, 2015 5:43 am
Wolfi says...



Done!
John 14:27:
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.
  





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Thu Aug 20, 2015 7:22 am
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Lightsong says...



Thanks for this review and the recent one you've made! :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Sun Aug 30, 2015 2:24 am
Wolfi says...



*is open!*
John 14:27:
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.
  





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Mon Aug 31, 2015 4:03 pm
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Halfbloodcheetah says...



Hi! Can you review my Part One of Chapter One of Forbidden Project?
Forbidden Project: Chapter 1, Part One

Thank you so much! I hope you like it! :)
Someone needs to make Captain Cold a fursona.
  





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Tue Sep 01, 2015 12:06 am
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yizhongt says...



Hey there, could you please review:

Chalice of Life: Chapter 8

Thanks in advance !
  





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Sat Sep 05, 2015 9:04 pm
Wolfi says...



*closed for the moment because I have very little time*

I'll get the reviews I owe done, though!
John 14:27:
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.
  





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Points: 6836
Reviews: 440
Mon Jan 18, 2016 8:51 am
Wolfi says...



*swipes dust off counter*

Wolfie's back in business. ;) Request away.
John 14:27:
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.
  








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