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Mon Jan 18, 2016 11:09 am
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Lightsong says...



I've been waiting for this. :D Please review Chapter Seven (you can review each part of it or summarize it at the end of the chapter - I don't mind)!

Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 7.1]
Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 7.2]
Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 7.3]
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Mon Jan 18, 2016 1:18 pm
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felistia says...



Hi wolfie, can I call you that. :D
I would love if you could review my novel Search for the ruby of fire. It is a fantasy and action\adventure novel with the main characters as dragons. It is a fan fiction with loose ties to the series Wings of Fire basically because my dragon species and beginning plot lay out is similar, but you don't' need to know the wings of fire series to read the story. It would be a great help if you could follow the story chapter by chapter, please. I have 29 chapters up at the moment. Thanks for your time. :D
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Search-for-the-Ruby-of-Fire-Chapter-1-edited-124445
  








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