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Fri Oct 02, 2015 12:55 pm
Lightsong says...



@Storygirl95: Me, popular? Flattered, but I'm not popular! xD Review's done, anyway! :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Fri Oct 02, 2015 5:58 pm
Storygirl95 says...



I think you're popular! Everyone knows you! And your forum has quite a few posts!
Thank you again so much for the review! I get tired of the words thank you because they do not often express the magnitude of my gratitude. (Rap time?)
So yeah! You're awesome! Thanks again! :D
Johnny was a chemist's son but Johnny is no more, for what Johnny thought was H2O was H2SO4. :wink:
  





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Sat Oct 03, 2015 6:43 am
Lightsong says...



Hahaha. Sure, I guess. ;) You're welcome, and see you again! :)
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Fri Oct 09, 2015 10:08 am
Lightsong says...



*bump thread* :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Sat Oct 17, 2015 1:25 am
Lightsong says...



*blows up the dust* :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Tue Nov 10, 2015 10:38 am
deleted21 says...



Okay, I love your poetry. So, it'd be really nice if you could give me few suggestions on this:

Left Out

Ah.. that's all! :3
  





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Wed Nov 11, 2015 6:43 am
Lightsong says...



@mialynire: Done! Come again! :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Tue Nov 24, 2015 7:26 am
felistia says...



Hi LightSong, Felistia here.
I would love if you could review the novel I am writing. I really need someone to follow through the whole story. It is fantasy and action\adventure and a loose fan fiction on the wings of fire series. :D :D :D :D
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Search-for-the-Ruby-of-Fire-Chapter-1-124445
  





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Tue Nov 24, 2015 9:34 am
Lightsong says...



@felistia: I'm on it! :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Fri Dec 11, 2015 8:48 pm
Charm says...



Can you please review my novel, New Haven.
Here's the link to the first chapter:
New Haven: Chapter 1: The Train of Memories
  





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Mon Dec 14, 2015 7:41 am
Lightsong says...



@MadWriter7: Request's on hold. ^^' I'm following another novel and currently busy, so after I've done reviewing that one, I'll try to review this one. Maybe I'll occasionally review this one.
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Wed Dec 23, 2015 6:26 am
InfiniteRectangles says...



Hello! Would you mind reviewing my poem Those Three Words for me please?
"We are, as a species, addicted to story. Even when the body goes to sleep, the mind stays up all night, telling itself stories" ~Jonathan Gottschall
  





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Sat Dec 26, 2015 12:44 pm
Lightsong says...



*gasp* Oh god, I missed this request! I'll be on it. :)
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Mon Dec 28, 2015 6:10 am
Lightsong says...



*bump thread* ;)
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Thu Dec 31, 2015 3:03 am
felistia says...



Hi Lightsong, Felistia here. I would love if you could review my newest poem, Tiger, Tiger Burning Bright. It is a realistic and a fan fiction poem. :D
Here it the link
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Tiger-Tiger-Burning-Bright-125953
  








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