Young Writers Society

So I will read anything fantasy based childrens fiction.

I will however not review anything that contains:

1. Nudity
2. Sexual influences
3. Vulgar language

Heres a link to my first story, I've condensed it to roughly 13,000 words.
The Imaginarium of Charlie Applebottom

I'm open to all forms of reviews, and even opinions and comments!

Just a note when asking me to review your work:
I am very critical, I do not mean to be, but I firmly believe in honesty is the best policy.

When asking for a review, please tell me whether you want me to fix any grammatical/spelling issues as well as continuity errors.

Or if you would just like my opinion based on whether or not I like what you have written, please specify and post a link below.

Many thanks