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Mon Oct 10, 2016 1:51 am
mavisknightley says...



Hello All,

I am submitting this piece of poetry for a scholarship contest, and could really use some feedback.

It was written about a friend of mine, who recently lost her son.

See link here: Mournings After

Please be brutal guys! I can take the heat. :)

Thanks,
-mav
  





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Fri Oct 14, 2016 5:55 am
yakitsa says...



Hello hello hello,
this is my first published work on the website - not afraid to say
I'd really appreciate some feedback!
Thanks.
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Fri Nov 11, 2016 8:58 pm
Featherstone says...



Heya all! I'm here to request a review on my first published work, Huntress: Chapter 1. It is a fantasy book about what defines good and evil, as well as vengeance and the futility of both vengeance and looking only at the small picture (which vengeance symbolizes). I'm gonna give you the quickie on the story, but if you don't want to read it skip to the bottom where there's the link.

It begins with a child named Agrona, a human who was raised by the werewolf/dire wolf/worg alliance. When she is initiated into the Pack, however, she doesn't become a lycanthrope. Thus, she is cast out and seeks refuge. Over the years, she seeks vengeance and her destiny in a story of loyalty and betrayal, life and death, light and darkness, but, above all, of good and evil...

Here is the link: Huntress, Chapter 1: Pack (Book 1 in the Wolfsbane Chronicles)
"All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."

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Thu Nov 17, 2016 10:54 am
Ejay1806 says...



I would immensely appreciate a review on my poem titled "Who am I ?"
Ejay
  





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Sun Nov 20, 2016 9:24 pm
Samk642 says...



Here is chapter 2 of the story I'm working on.... this is my first attempt seriously at a book, so sorry for my lack of skills The Darknesses Resurgence Chapter 2
  





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Sat Nov 26, 2016 11:15 pm
EverySecond says...



Could someone please review my poem?
I'm looking for some more opinions :)
Morrigan
Thanks.
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Mon Nov 28, 2016 12:07 am
dracowave says...



Hey guys i would really appreciate anyone that can review and critique my novel named Return to Nothing Draft. Thanks in advance
  





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Mon Nov 28, 2016 11:25 am
BeTheChange says...



I'd love some reviews on my speech!
Accelerated Reader Is Bad
Thanks in advance. :)
  





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Tue Nov 29, 2016 4:57 pm
Featherstone says...



Hello all!

I am currently writing the novel Shadowsong, and was inquiring as to whether I might get some more reviews on it. So far there is the prologue through chapter four. Here are the links:

Shadowsong: Prologue

Shadowsong: Chapter 1

Shadowsong: Chapter 2- This World of Light

Shadowsong: Chapter 3- Those Echoing Cries of Pain

Shadowsong: Chapter 4- Yes, Master

-Feather
"All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."

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Fri Dec 09, 2016 4:57 pm
CateRose17 says...



I am after a review for my personal paper: Dear John: you do not define me
  





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Tue Dec 27, 2016 2:59 am
ewolf20 says...



hey, i hate to intrude but can anyone give an honest to god review on my work? here it is if anyone wants to take a peek kaiego, first few pages
  





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Sat Dec 31, 2016 7:38 pm
AlyTheBookworm says...



I'll review one or two of the reviewer's works (depending on the size) for a review on Luminous. It's Novel / Chapter: Fantasy, Dramatic.

Here's a link. If you take a look at it, thanks a ton! :D
Luminous
  





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Sun Jan 01, 2017 1:17 am
maisewriting says...



Hello!
Could someone please review the first chapter of my novel Axylia?
It's a fantasy about the conflict between three races: Humans, Fae, and Elves. Axylia, the titular character, is Fae but was raised as a human. At the beginning of the novel she's just turned 17 and is forced to flee the human city of Kelir for fear of persecution.
Thanks in advance!
  





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Mon Jan 02, 2017 6:52 am
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Dracula says...



If you're able to review Follow The Shining Stars that would be cool. It is a short story just under 1500 words.
I bought a cactus. A week later it died. I got depressed because I thought Damn, I am less nurturing than a desert.
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Mon Jan 02, 2017 7:49 am
Redbox275 says...



Please review Stuck on Osetsa
Summary: Cameron is transferred into another dimension where only a fellow outsider lives on the entire planet. They can escape to home, but it's not so simple
Thank you
Stuck on Osetsa
  








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