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Sun Apr 10, 2016 4:37 pm
DivergentDemigod says...



Hey everyone...
Plz review my work "the secret dream world of a book-o-holic" it's still sitting in the green room... :(
Here's the link to it....

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=128439

Thank you :)
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Mon Apr 11, 2016 4:54 pm
FlowerToBloom says...



Hello,
I would be pleased if anyone could review the prologue of my book I'm attempting to write named Seek. I am no Stephen King bu I am trying my best to make it a good story! I already have enough written for it to be a novella so this is really just the beginning.

Prologue
  





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Tue Apr 12, 2016 11:36 pm
BlueJayWalker10 says...



Hey there! So, I know that I may not get a review, but I'd like to try anyway on this one.
Could you please review my work, Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 2? I've already gotten several reviews on the first chapter--most people told me to cut it out as it was unneeded--but I've only gotten I think three or four on this one.
Thanks!
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Wed Apr 13, 2016 10:43 am
DivergentDemigod says...



I would be really grateful if you guys reviewed my work "when I was young..." :)
LIVE YOUNG! LIVE FREE!
Don't be someone who searches, finds and runs away.

Spoiler! :
You have to get lost before you find yourself.
  





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Wed Apr 20, 2016 3:43 am
yizhongt says...



Hey everyone, could someone please review:

Starlight: Chapter 2 (Part II)

Thanks in advance!
  





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Fri Apr 22, 2016 6:38 pm
snakeboy54 says...



I would like for a review for the first chapter of my new series that i'm starting up called "The Hell Bound Kids"
  





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Fri Apr 22, 2016 10:01 pm
PoeticCowboy says...



Hey guys, I am new here. I just wanted some advise on my book, Invincible, and I was wondering if you guys would be free enough to give a person some advise.

Thanks,

~Poetic Cowboy
  





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Mon May 02, 2016 5:20 am
Far1812 says...



Hello lovelies! I welcome any and all reviews for my as-yet-unnamed novel. The chapters are fairly short, so they should be a quick read.

A brief description: The many seasons of Jamie and his best friend Jessica. (Plus superpowers)

Of Dust Balls
Of Summer Days

Thank you kindly in advance! (I'll thank you individually if you review.)
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Tue May 03, 2016 10:41 pm
MooMoo says...



I would really love it if someone (or multiple someones) read my novel. I have been on here off and on for years and submitted many clips.

http://www.lulu.com/shop/joanna-malcom/ ... 74076.html
  





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Wed May 11, 2016 2:26 pm
DivergentDemigod says...



Hi everyone...
Plz review my work "dear Mr maple tree"

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=129182#c584147
LIVE YOUNG! LIVE FREE!
Don't be someone who searches, finds and runs away.

Spoiler! :
You have to get lost before you find yourself.
  





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Fri May 27, 2016 5:16 am
SacredPen says...



MUST. HAVE. REVIEW. ON. HORROR. STORY.


or I won't know what to do for the next part... :(

Taking A Nap. Yawn 1 (First Draft)

pls...4 jus a yen a dai, u can stop short stories from going untouched. hlp...pls...
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Wed Jun 08, 2016 12:43 pm
DivergentDemigod says...



Hey peeps i'm trying my han at short stories...
Plz review and tell me what u think of it???

Here is the link

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/phangirldivergent46/Ukel-129640
LIVE YOUNG! LIVE FREE!
Don't be someone who searches, finds and runs away.

Spoiler! :
You have to get lost before you find yourself.
  





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Mon Jun 20, 2016 6:08 pm
Aravind says...



I published my first work for YWS titled "Chase".

Chase


Hope you enjoy reading and reviewing it :)
Cheers :D
  





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Thu Jun 30, 2016 9:50 pm
nwakaemechinonso12 says...



kindly review my latest work "THE BOOKWORM"
  





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Sun Jul 10, 2016 10:30 pm
Laurenh6 says...



Please could I have some feedback on the "Watching" - the most recent version (improved version) - thank you :)
  








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