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Thu Feb 04, 2016 4:37 am
StupidSoup says...



Can any of you review hunters take a look at my poem?

The Runner in the Sun
I have a license that lets me solve aids - A friend of mine


Here Comes the Birdyyyy ~Poopsie


You gotta have the confidence of a gazelle running through a herd of lions - TK Sharp


I was once Numbers

Now I am Soup
  





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Thu Feb 04, 2016 4:46 am
themanofstars says...



Hope and Me
It's a poetry and i really need reviews on it. Thanks to all reviewers in advance :smt003 :smt003
  





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Mon Feb 22, 2016 1:44 pm
BornLoser says...



Hey hey! I was wondering if any of you lovely people would like to review my most recent chapter in my fanfiction? It's an action/adventure sort of thing :3 you may have to read the previous chapters to get a feel for the story, but you can just read the chapter itself if you want ^-^

Any feedback is really appreciated!

Chapter 3 - Chaos

Thank you in advance! :D
"... And we were born to lose" - My Chemical Romance
  





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Mon Feb 22, 2016 8:15 pm
CodyKnight says...



Knight's Gauntlet

I would really appreciate some reviews on my first chapter, I'm editing my second chapter now and would appreciate some feedback before I start my third. I appreciate anyone who takes the time to do so, and thank you in advance :)
  





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Tue Feb 23, 2016 7:32 pm
KaiRyu says...



I would LOVE it if someone would review my book, Fire and wind chapters 4 and 5. Kinda at a standstill right now....
“So what? You're another person so of course you look different. What do you need to be ashamed for?” Ciel Phantomhive

"Reality is an illusion, the universe is a hologram buy gold bye!" Bill Cipher
  





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Sun Feb 28, 2016 3:02 am
Stephen62 says...



Can someone please review my story Traffic Jam? Thanks! https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Stephen62/Traffic-Jam-127458
  





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Sun Feb 28, 2016 7:50 am
dracowave says...



Hey everyone I have a novel called The Seven Heavenly Kings Revamped and i would really appreciate any and all reviews.
  





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Sun Mar 20, 2016 7:51 pm
Glauke says...



Reviews for my new poem, It's raining, but I don't believe that it's raining, would be much appreciated! :)
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be still, sad heart, and cease repining
behind the clouds is the sun still shining
  





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Sun Mar 27, 2016 11:13 pm
Codayy says...



Any reviews to this poem, Prayer Labyrinth would be appreciated.
  





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Sun Apr 03, 2016 3:40 am
yizhongt says...



Hey everyone, could someone please review

Starlight: Prologue

Thanks and much appreciated.
  





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Mon Apr 04, 2016 1:53 pm
Glauke says...



Any feedback on my newest poem would be much appreciated. :)
An Ocean Death Would Be Beautiful
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be still, sad heart, and cease repining
behind the clouds is the sun still shining
  





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Tue Apr 05, 2016 1:40 am
insertwordshere says...



Hello! I am g1ldv, and I am currently working on a poem that I believe has a lot of potential. So I'm looking for you! Yes you the person who's reading this currently. No matter good or bad, big or small I want your input! The more the better. So the poem is called "The Void", thanks for your time. :D
  








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