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Points: 200
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Fri Dec 03, 2021 4:57 pm
rozie says...

Hi! I'd really like someone to have a read of the first 5 chapters of my novel The Light In Your Eye, which is a post-apocalypse-ish slice-of-life story. Just not sure quite where to go with it and I need to know if there's anything I can do to make it make more sense!! Thank you for your consideration, PM me if you're interested! :D

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Points: 167
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Tue Dec 28, 2021 9:21 am
Juliet21 says...

Hi there! My name is Juliet and I am in the midst of writing my first ever serious piece of literature, a novella called 'Thrice'! Below is the first chapter, 'Happy Birthday'. I am after any feedback including criticisms as in the end I hope to make this an ebook someone can pay to read (hopefully that's not too ambitious lol, let me know what you think!) Thank you so much for stopping by and have a beautiful day :)

Happy Birthday
Thank you for reading and have a beautiful day :) - Juliet S

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Points: 78
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Sat Jan 01, 2022 9:17 pm
Roundsquare says...

Hiya, could someone please take a look at a scary story I'm working on? Any kind of feedback would be greatly appreciated. By the way, Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.

You can find it here... SANGOMA - A Novel (Chapter 1)
“Nobody's perfect. Well, there was this one guy, but we killed him....”

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5 Reviews

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Points: 160
Reviews: 5
Tue Jan 11, 2022 8:59 pm
StormyZSnifter says...

If anybody is interested in a story beginning with a hamburger, a mouse, and a highwheel bicycle...

I would love a review of the first bit of my fantasy adventure story, The Tale of the Shade Squad. If you are feeling benevolent, the link is:


Thanks, and have a glorious day...
“It is well known that reading quickens the growth of a heart like nothing else.”

― Catherynne M. Valente, The Girl Who Circumnavigated Fairyland in a Ship of Her Own Making

"I believe in Cornpy Supremacy."

- Stormy Z. Snifter

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66 Reviews

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Points: 37
Reviews: 66
Mon Mar 07, 2022 6:31 pm
BEASTtheHUN says...

May someone please review my work Picking through the Rubble Break 2
Thank you.

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353 Reviews

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Points: 56
Reviews: 353
Wed Sep 21, 2022 2:53 pm
Fishr says...

Memento Mori

Here it is!

Anything I need work on, please let me know.
The sadness drains through me rather than skating over my skin. It travels through every cell to reach the ground. I filter it yet strangely enough, I keep what was pure and it is the dirt that leaves.

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Wed Dec 28, 2022 6:17 am
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elli4975 says...

I am looking for someone to review my short story: A Warm Embrace

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48 Reviews

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Points: 2485
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Sat Feb 18, 2023 8:46 pm
shima says...

Hey, looking for someone to beta-read the first two chapters of my fanfic, Face-to-Face.
Preferably someone (remotely) familiar with the Boys universe.

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Tue Feb 28, 2023 12:30 pm
waterfalls says...

hey, i would like some reviews on my poem titled: orchids and moonlight

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Wed Mar 22, 2023 2:16 pm
Ashnirai says...

Hello! I would love for reviews on my fairytale devotio! A warning that it is a little long (4.5k) and it has a bittersweet ending and themes of self-sacrifice. Thank you!

Love is friendship that has caught fire. It is quiet understanding, mutual confidence, sharing and forgiving. It is loyalty through good and bad times. It settles for less than perfection and makes allowances for human weaknesses.
— Ann Landers