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Sun Dec 06, 2020 3:36 pm
Zaxivers says...



Hello everyone, would you like to take a look at my work and review it? Really needs help to review my first story and what you think about it... Thanks! :D

Here is the link : Prologue
Let's go on an Adventure!




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76 Reviews


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Thu Dec 10, 2020 10:18 pm
Dest says...



Hi everyone, looking for feedback on a short story I'm working on!

Yolk's on Me (1)
Yolk's on Me (2)




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115 Reviews


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Mon Dec 21, 2020 5:32 pm
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DreamyAlice says...



Hey I would love if you review my new work name 'I don't remember'
Imagination is a superpower. Use it well!




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311 Reviews


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Tue Jan 05, 2021 4:47 am
Riverlight says...



Hey, y'all! I have a short poem that I'd like reviewed, thhansk!

She is Mine

-Kendall
The politics of the world may be corrupt, but that does not mean that we must be corrupted ourselves.




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43 Reviews


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Sun Feb 07, 2021 7:14 pm
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Miraculor77 says...



@Vil
I tried going to your poem, but it's saying that "this work is currently unavailable." If you want others to review it, you'll need to set it as "public" and not "private." Hope this helps. :)
I'd rather die than live without passion.
- Jungkook

I do reviews: Reviews by Mira




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11 Reviews


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Sun Feb 07, 2021 10:08 pm
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vannilawriter says...



please review my short story It is the Nature of the Universe




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5 Reviews


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Fri Mar 05, 2021 4:30 pm
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Ryu says...



Hey everyone!

Iā€™m about an hour old here haha!


I would be thrilled if you could take the time to check out my story about international urban legends! Mild language but suitable for people 13+ but this site is generally 13+...

Thanks so much!
Link is here! Prologue - Hanako-San




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66 Reviews


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Reviews: 66
Fri Mar 05, 2021 6:41 pm
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BEASTtheHUN says...



I am requesting a review on my chapter 1 The commission.




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58 Reviews


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Tue Apr 13, 2021 4:50 pm
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quitecontrary says...



Hey y'all! I'd love it if someone could review my poem, Hospitality!




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66 Reviews


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Tue May 04, 2021 1:17 pm
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BEASTtheHUN says...



Hey, I would like somebody to review my work. https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=151267
Thanks!




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Thu May 27, 2021 8:40 pm
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LilPWilly says...



Mi poema, En Solamente Mi, no spanish required. Por favor
Gracias šŸ™
God, girl, adventure




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311 Reviews


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Sun Jul 11, 2021 2:25 am
Riverlight says...



I've started a new Star Wars fanfic that I'd love to get out of the Green Room.

Star Wars: Episode 4: The Rise of Maul (Part 1)
The politics of the world may be corrupt, but that does not mean that we must be corrupted ourselves.




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44 Reviews


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Tue Sep 21, 2021 3:18 am
IMK says...



Can I get a review for my short story/prose poem called bitter sweet eternity?

Bittersweet Eternity

I need more opinions, i thrive on feedback.




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Tue Nov 30, 2021 6:30 pm
BEASTtheHUN says...



I would love a review on my work Picking through the rubble. Thanks!

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/BEASTtheHUN/Picking-Through-The-Rubble-Chapter-1-153042







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