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Tue Dec 15, 2015 3:41 am
Rin321 says...



Hey! I would LOVE to get a review on my newest work:

Your Last Minute Preparations 10 Days Before Christmas

It is pretty short, and comical! Enjoy! <3
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I am a funtastic awesome writer-
what are you?


You are an awesome writer as well-that is what you are

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Thu Dec 17, 2015 10:40 pm
BlackhawkUnder says...



Hi, I was really hoping someone could review my novel chapters. I completely rewrote my chapter 1 from scratch and haven't really gotten any feedback on it since I reposted it a couple of weeks ago. Any opinions on my chapter 2 would be greatly appreciated as well! Posting all chapters below for anyone who prefers background info before reviewing. Thanks!
-Hawk

Prologue, The Name Game
Chapter 1.1, The Name Game **UPDATED**
Chapter 1.2, The Name Game
Chapter 2.1, The Name Game
Chapter 2.2, The Name Game **UPDATED**
  





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Mon Dec 21, 2015 5:16 am
InfiniteRectangles says...



Hello! I'm new to YWS, just made my account today, and I'm looking for reviews on my first poem I've posted to the site.
I'm Only 18
Thanks! I shall be infinitely grateful!
"We are, as a species, addicted to story. Even when the body goes to sleep, the mind stays up all night, telling itself stories" ~Jonathan Gottschall
  





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Mon Dec 21, 2015 11:11 pm
LMJRayner says...



I'd love someone to review my short novel, starting with chapter one, sci-fi action adventure, the other chapters can be found on the side bar like usual. Thanks!


Bastion: Barracuda - Chapter One - Red Rum
  





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Tue Dec 22, 2015 9:13 pm
InfiniteRectangles says...



Hello! I'm looking for some feedback on my satire The Creativity Epidemic It's my first satire that I've written and I could really use some reviews! Thanks! :3
"We are, as a species, addicted to story. Even when the body goes to sleep, the mind stays up all night, telling itself stories" ~Jonathan Gottschall
  





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Fri Dec 25, 2015 8:17 pm
BlueDaisy2018 says...



Please review my play that cannot be named. Seriously. I cannot think of a name! Help please!!!! Help! I need an title for this piece!! It's sad. That's seriously the name of it as of now. PLEEEEEEEEASE help me!!!!!
BlueDaisy2018 a.k.a. Jamie <3
  





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Sun Jan 03, 2016 6:04 pm
wonderlandashes says...



I would love a review on my new poem "on waiting". It's more abstract than what I typically do, and a bit out of my comfort zone, so I'd really like to hear some feedback. :wink:
  





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Wed Jan 13, 2016 5:53 pm
Remy020 says...



Please Review Secrets Chapter 1 :D
To write is to write is to write is to write is to write is to write is to write is to write.
Gertrude Stein.

The most important thing is to enjoy your life - to be happy - it's all that matters.
Audrey Hepburn.

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Sun Jan 17, 2016 5:53 pm
Seipa says...



I'd like a review on this Winnie the Punk

I've already had 2 , but I'd still like a little more feedback. Thank you!
Cottleston, Cottleston, Cottleston Pie.
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Mon Jan 18, 2016 5:58 pm
AnarchyWolf says...



I'd love someone to review Chapter one of my story, The Winged. Thanks!

-AnarchyWolf
Don't resist the water. Welcome it.
  





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Tue Jan 19, 2016 7:22 pm
SkarletteRose says...



Hey guys, would any of you mind reviewing this first chapter for me?

Chapter 1: Revelations
  





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Wed Jan 20, 2016 11:02 pm
janarose says...



Hi, I've posted 5 chapters of my novel Near To You. Any feedback on any of the chapters would be greatly appreciated! I linked the first chapter, the others can be found on the sidebar. Thanks in advance!
  





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Mon Jan 25, 2016 10:13 pm
Rin321 says...



I was looking at my portfolio and guess what I continued- 2 MINUTES! I just finished part two. I decided to make one more part after it!Can people please review it? Read '2 minutes' and then read this! Sorry that it took so long for those who have been waiting! :)

2 minutes

2 Minutes - Part 2
Roses are red
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I am a funtastic awesome writer-
what are you?


You are an awesome writer as well-that is what you are

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Mon Feb 01, 2016 12:45 am
Costa says...



Hey there folks,

I've had this story building up in my head over the past years and decided to try my hand at putting it to paper.

Mind, I'm an absolute amateur as a writer and, as such, would really appreciate any feedback.

Here's the first draft of the prologue and first chapter.

This is a bit of a hybrid "semi-realistic" fantasy (oxymoron, I know...) set in our actual world but with your recommended dosage of magic, divinities, swordplay and whatnot. If it matters, the technological state of society would be the equivalent to where we were in around the 1500s.

Many thanks!
  





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Wed Feb 03, 2016 2:37 am
restlessheart14 says...



Hey I'd like a review on my newest work titled "The Outsider". Please and thank you :)

The Outsider
Restlessheart

"Each day means a new 24 hours. Each day means everything's possible again. You live in the moment, you die in the moment, you take it all one day at a time."
  








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