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Sun Jul 16, 2017 3:47 pm
mephistophelesangel says...



Hi! Could anyone please review my short story (divided into 4 parts)?

(so don’t lose me, follow me home) : 1/4
  





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Sat Oct 21, 2017 2:11 am
Samk642 says...



The Darknesses Resurgence Chapter 4 Would anyone mind reading and reviewing? Thanks.
  





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Wed Oct 25, 2017 8:58 pm
LizzieH3 says...



Can anyone have a look at any of the three poems I have posted? Thanks x
Sinking, Thinking, Blinking
The Want to Look Up
The Worry Child
Last edited by LizzieH3 on Thu Oct 26, 2017 6:21 pm, edited 1 time in total.
  





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Wed Oct 25, 2017 11:50 pm
BluesClues says...



@LizzieH3 can you leave some links here to a particular poem or two that you really want more feedback on? That way whoever looks will have a clearer idea of where to start#
  





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Mon Oct 30, 2017 11:09 pm
shima says...



Would like someone to review my literary/alcohol experiment - Last Exit to Now/Here
  





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Mon Nov 27, 2017 1:42 am
ellasnotebook says...



Would anyone like to review my very short flash fiction piece? It's an experiment in 2nd POV, so it needs the constructive criticism, ha! It's called The Lake and the Stars.

The Lake and the Stars
with love ((;
  





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Mon Nov 27, 2017 6:10 pm
IzzyIsHappy says...



REVIEW MY WORK PLEASE

Could someone (or everyone) review my work called ~Suckers 3~ I need some feedback!

Thank you!

Izzy
You can close your eyes if you want, sometimes things are less scary
  





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Mon Nov 27, 2017 9:47 pm
SophiaClark says...



I would love a review on chapter one on my fantasy novel, "The Fate Of The Sorcerers."
  





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Tue Nov 28, 2017 12:49 am
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Don't forget to leave a link to the work you want reviewed! Otherwise potential reviewers won't know where to find it.

Kyllorac wrote:
Welcome
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General Request Repository


This is the place to make general review requests, and also the place to which general request threads are banished. While requesting here means that you may get more than four reviews in one go, be warned:


There is no guarantee that you will get reviews.


As with all threads in WRFF, there are a few requirements to follow:

For Requesters:

Only one open request at a time. A request is considered open if it is the last post in the thread.

In other words, do not double-post. If you would like to request reviews on a different work and your post is the last one in the thread, edit your post to update it.

Remember to include a link to the work you want reviewed. If you make your work easy to get to, you're more likely to get reviews.

Also, be sure to thank your reviewers for reviewing, even if you don't agree with what they said in their review.


For Reviewers:

Please Like the posts of any requests you fill.


Good luck, and may the reviewers be kind to you.
  





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Tue Nov 28, 2017 5:37 am
writervid says...



Hi! I was hoping I could get my one act play reviewed? I definitely understand if you can't or won't, it's a bit long, but I figured I'd ask. Thank you!

[url http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work ... lay-138242]
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Tue Dec 05, 2017 8:28 pm
shima says...



Basically - would be quite thankful if anybody would review my monologue.
Exit monologue (for a situationship)
  





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Sun Jan 21, 2018 10:46 pm
daccaribuchelli says...



Hi everyone. :)

My name is Daccari and I'm looking to have the sequel of an elemental
fantasy series reviewed by anyone interested in the fantasy genre.

I've included the back cover blurb below to give you a feel for the book.

To save the one you love, be prepared to risk it all.

Five years have passed since the fateful day that led to her husband’s demise: Violetta prays that her daughter never learns the truth, but that’s not the only thing she hopes never rises to the surface.

With a mysterious storm blanketing Peradon, Violetta, Lord Jork, and Xyhoni set out to uncover its source. The last thing they expected was for her young daughter to vanish. As troubling rumours swell, Violetta reaches her wits end. Now she must journey through the four realms to find answers and recover her daughter before it’s too late.

https://www.amazon.com/Symbiote-Peradon-Fantasy-Book-2-ebook/dp/B078LNSLDD/
Dax Munro
  





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Mon Jan 29, 2018 7:24 pm
emma1045 says...



I joined YWS a few days ago and I've posted two of my works so far. So if anyone could please review my works.

Thank you!
  





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Mon Jan 29, 2018 11:24 pm
Lumi says...



@emma1045 --> I'd love to review something of yours. I'm sure others would as well if you could link them in your post! :)
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
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Thu Feb 01, 2018 8:00 pm
nightmarenoodles says...



Hello! I'd like reviews on this work, please! I'd only like feedback on the plot and story, not grammar, please! Thank you!

aishite
  








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