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Sat Apr 15, 2017 3:42 pm
I'm looking for reviews for my short poem
Sun Apr 16, 2017 7:11 am
Well, as long as this thread is here I might as well post a link to the first extract of my fantasy novel centred around a race of winged humans (I've coined them "Airbornes"). It's
if you want to have a read.
A Squills I've been interviewed in :3
I also make guitar music
"In the beginning, the Universe was created. This has made a lot of people very angry, and been widely regarded as a bad move."
Sun Apr 16, 2017 7:38 am
If anyone doesn't mind, I'd like some more feedback on my historical fiction
Diary of King Alexander
Thu Apr 20, 2017 7:13 am
Hi I would really like reviews for my realistic short story
The Other Side
I am writing it for a short story competition of which the deadline is tomorrow so if it can be done asap that would be really helpful thanks xx
Sat Apr 22, 2017 5:42 pm
If anyone doesn't mind, I'd like some more feedback on my first chapter.
CRACKED (Chapter One)
“Nobody's perfect. Well, there was this one guy, but we killed him....”
Thu May 04, 2017 11:57 pm
Hey, could someone review my idea for a story?
Sat May 06, 2017 10:47 pm
Can you all check out my poem
? I only got one criticism in three reviews, saying one word was off.
Sat May 13, 2017 9:10 pm
Hey, I have already gotten two helpful reviews on my short story "Aged paper, ink and dust" but I would totally appreciate a few more since I have to have a final copy of it due Wednesday for my AP Literature class. I don't know how to insert links but I would if I could.
"So come with me where Dreamers are born and Time is never planned, Just think of happy things, And your heart will fly on wings, in Never Never Land."-Peter Pan
"Life is the art of Drawing... without an eraser."
Tue May 16, 2017 12:17 am
I need some reviews to improve myself and my work since this my first time joining such wonderful community of writers. If you like humor, come and go check this out
Toilet is Life
If you want some more, go and check out my profile.
Sun Jun 04, 2017 6:12 pm
I would really appreciate just one more review on my piece
Prologue: Monkey Wrench
. It already has 2 reviews, but one of those reviews was fairly short and it would be very helpful to have 1 more person give some input. Thanks in advance!
Do not try to be pretty. You weren't meant to be pretty; you were meant to burn down the earth and graffiti the sky. Don't let anyone ever simplify you to just 'pretty'
If there is hope, it must lie in the proles.
Wed Jun 07, 2017 6:30 am
Please give constructive criticism on how I can
With the Rooster's Crow (Complete)
Sorry to be picky, but if you can only find one or two tiny things to fix, please leave the reviewing for someone harsher and post your opinion as a comment. I really want to make this good and need to know what's wrong with it and what can be made better, not what's already good. Thank you.
I bought a
A week later
I got depressed because I thought
Damn, I am less nurturing than a desert
Fri Jun 16, 2017 1:51 am
I've recently published a story called Diseased. I have two chapters published, but I'll link the first one, I don't care if you read the second one.
Diseased (Ch. 1)
Mon Jul 10, 2017 7:15 am
I would be very grateful if someone reviewed my one chapter short story Malec fanfiction titled
"Exiting the Clave's Strict Closet (Malec Fanfiction)"
based on the New York Times Bestselling Series
"The Mortal Instruments"
by Cassandra Clare, more popularly known by the netflix television series
(which is so unworthy of being a show, it is seriously ABSOLUTELY NOTHING like the books). Though, you do not need to know the background to read/review the piece.
Sincerely, Bailey Matwiiw
Fri Jul 14, 2017 3:44 pm
I'm starting a new novel (Regime 91) that I would really love reviews on. Any feedback I can get would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!
- Regime 91:
Regime 91 (Chapter #1 & Part #1)
P.S- It's dystopian/military themed, but with a twist.
~ "Life is a book, and you are the author. Write your own story."
Sun Jul 16, 2017 12:58 am
Would someone mind reviewing any of the things I've posted? I know that sounds silly, but any sort of review would be good. Thanks!
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— John Oliver
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