Young Writers Society

Hi everyone!I am new here, and I am looking for some feedback for my first writing. Here is the link to my short story titled, "I wanted my life back".
​I wanted my life back

Thank you so much!

I'd like my work The Fire Requiem, Chapter 1 Blood & Scars reviewed.

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I'd like some feedback for my short story.

Hi, I'd really appreciate some feedback on my most recent poem, Aquatic Flight. It's a short-ish poem about a dream I had.

Thanks in advance!

I was wondering if someone could review my work ‘fairy tales: 1-3’.

Edit: my work is now out of the green room, so please review other peoples works that need it more before mine, but if this sounds like something interesting to anyone please feel free to review. the more the merrier.

I need reviews for my 'Love Part 4', which I have posted in the Short Story Section of the website. Please help me out.

Hi. Looking of someone to review my poems:
The tiles are: Death, cup of tea
Thank you

I was wondering if someone could review my work, 'for poems about time'.

thanks.

link:
Four poems about time

Edit: it now has two reviews, but if this sounds like something that may interest you, feel free to review.

Edit edit: while it is now out of the green room, I would very much appreciate mire in depth reviews, as the two I have received on it are not particularly helpful.

Hi
It's been a very long time since the last time I published a poem, I'm super insecure about it so I'm in desperate need for honest feedback.

Here's the poem

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Leviari/Les-Feurs-Du-Mal-146777

thank you to anyone who might help me out

Hello, asking here because I need a review asap (since like, the story needs to be done in a week or so). My first time writing here in almost 2 years, so yeah.
Really hoping for good and honest advice, much appreciated.
Here is the link to the short story: This is my world. For now and forever.

Hi! Wondering if someone could review my novel chapters 3 and 4. Links below:
Corrupted Courage Chapter 3
Corrupted Courage Chapter 4
Reviews on earlier chapters are also more than welcome. Thanks!

Would love for someone to review my short story Memories and ashes.
Memories and Ashes

I would love to have someone review my work Slave Girl: Chapter 1
Here is the link Slave Girl: Chapter 1

Thank you in advance!
-Shadeflame

Requesting reviews for the latest chapter in my novel.
Chapter Four