Young Writers Society

Hello All,

I am submitting this piece of poetry for a scholarship contest, and could really use some feedback.

It was written about a friend of mine, who recently lost her son.

See link here: Mournings After

Please be brutal guys! I can take the heat.

Thanks,
-mav

Hello hello hello,
this is my first published work on the website - not afraid to say
I'd really appreciate some feedback!
Thanks.

Heya all! I'm here to request a review on my first published work, Huntress: Chapter 1. It is a fantasy book about what defines good and evil, as well as vengeance and the futility of both vengeance and looking only at the small picture (which vengeance symbolizes). I'm gonna give you the quickie on the story, but if you don't want to read it skip to the bottom where there's the link.

It begins with a child named Agrona, a human who was raised by the werewolf/dire wolf/worg alliance. When she is initiated into the Pack, however, she doesn't become a lycanthrope. Thus, she is cast out and seeks refuge. Over the years, she seeks vengeance and her destiny in a story of loyalty and betrayal, life and death, light and darkness, but, above all, of good and evil...

Here is the link: Huntress, Chapter 1: Pack (Book 1 in the Wolfsbane Chronicles)

I would immensely appreciate a review on my poem titled "Who am I ?"

Here is chapter 2 of the story I'm working on.... this is my first attempt seriously at a book, so sorry for my lack of skills The Darknesses Resurgence Chapter 2

Could someone please review my poem?
I'm looking for some more opinions
Morrigan
Thanks.

Hey guys i would really appreciate anyone that can review and critique my novel named Return to Nothing Draft. Thanks in advance

I'd love some reviews on my speech!
Accelerated Reader Is Bad
Thanks in advance.

Hello all!

I am currently writing the novel Shadowsong, and was inquiring as to whether I might get some more reviews on it. So far there is the prologue through chapter four. Here are the links:

Shadowsong: Prologue

Shadowsong: Chapter 1

Shadowsong: Chapter 2- This World of Light

Shadowsong: Chapter 3- Those Echoing Cries of Pain

Shadowsong: Chapter 4- Yes, Master

-Feather

I am after a review for my personal paper: Dear John: you do not define me

hey, i hate to intrude but can anyone give an honest to god review on my work? here it is if anyone wants to take a peek kaiego, first few pages

I'll review one or two of the reviewer's works (depending on the size) for a review on Luminous. It's Novel / Chapter: Fantasy, Dramatic.

Here's a link. If you take a look at it, thanks a ton!
Luminous

Hello!
Could someone please review the first chapter of my novel Axylia?
It's a fantasy about the conflict between three races: Humans, Fae, and Elves. Axylia, the titular character, is Fae but was raised as a human. At the beginning of the novel she's just turned 17 and is forced to flee the human city of Kelir for fear of persecution.
Thanks in advance!

If you're able to review Follow The Shining Stars that would be cool. It is a short story just under 1500 words.

Please review Stuck on Osetsa
Summary: Cameron is transferred into another dimension where only a fellow outsider lives on the entire planet. They can escape to home, but it's not so simple
Thank you
Stuck on Osetsa