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Tue Jul 12, 2016 2:28 pm

ExOmelas says...

Hi all, please could you review the latest chapter of my sci-fi series Monkey Boy's Adventures in Space?

Monkey Boy's Adventures In Space - 2.2

Happy to provide a synopsis of the story so far if necessary.

Cheers, Biscuits

What fools these mortals be!
William Shakespeare
A Midsummer Night's Dream

Who cares if one more light goes out?
Well I do.
Linkin Park
One More Light

I'm bigger than a hexidecimal...

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Fri Jul 15, 2016 9:13 pm

penfeme says...

I would greatly appreciate a review for my poem "all that I am is starlight, dim" - thanks!

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Mon Jul 18, 2016 11:58 am

JuliasSneezer says...

Hi, everyone!

I would really appreciate it if someone could please review the first chapter of my novel in progress:

The Cave - Chapter I - The Operation

Thank you to anyone who reviews! Anyone who reviews, I promise to review something of theirs! Many thanks,

-Cupcakes :smt023

"When in doubt, improvise!"
-Winny the woodpecker

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Mon Jul 25, 2016 10:43 am

Kazeybear says...

I would love a review on my poem at; Pain

Thank you very much!

~Kazey

We write to taste life twice, in the moment and in retrospect - Anaïs Nin
You must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you - Ray Bradbury

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Mon Jul 25, 2016 7:26 pm

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MemeQueen says...

If it's not too much trouble, could I have a review on my first chapter? Thank you alll.

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Tue Jul 26, 2016 1:43 am

Redbox275 says...

I would like someone to review my short story

The Dead Boy, the Shattered Locket, and the Broken Childhood Memories

The Dead Boy, the Shattered Locket, and the Broken Childhood Memories[url][/url]

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Wed Jul 27, 2016 10:49 pm

MayaM says...

If someone could review my short story called: Alone with my Thoughts that would be incredible! Thanks!

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Sun Aug 07, 2016 2:18 pm

emoglobiin says...

I'm a new one here and could use some advise on my writing. I'd appreciate it if you read my short story "The A Team".

link: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/emoglobiin/The-A-Team-130875

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Thu Aug 11, 2016 6:58 pm

Kazeybear says...

i would love a review on my most recent poem, Only Time Will Tell

We write to taste life twice, in the moment and in retrospect - Anaïs Nin
You must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you - Ray Bradbury

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Fri Aug 12, 2016 9:55 am

Ejay1806 says...

I am looking for reviews for my poem Friend and Money:A Mystery

Ejay

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Sun Aug 21, 2016 11:49 pm

restlessheart14 says...

Hey all! I would like to request a review on my piece called night and day. It is a short poem that highlights romanticism and sound devices. Thanks

Night and Day

Restlessheart

"Each day means a new 24 hours. Each day means everything's possible again. You live in the moment, you die in the moment, you take it all one day at a time."

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Sun Sep 04, 2016 2:34 am

Vellichor says...

If anyone had some free time, I would very much appreciate any feedback on my poem, The Power of Words. I'm new to poetry, so don't expect much xD Thank you all!

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