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Mon Jul 13, 2020 4:16 am
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Liminality says...



Hi there! I'd really appreciate it if someone could review this short story I've written: Phantoms
  





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Fri Jul 17, 2020 6:56 pm
TheScribe says...



Thanks for the review!
  





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Sun Jul 19, 2020 9:53 pm
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TheScribe says...



Hello there! I'd like someone to please review the fourth installment of my book "America Gone," which you an find here--

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Vilnius/America-Gone--Chapter-Four-148114
  





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Fri Aug 21, 2020 12:30 pm
MaxaM says...



Hello, i'd like to request a review for the most recent chapters of my novel, here's the link: Neighborhood Tales: The Tale of a Hedgehog (Chapters 3 and 4)
  





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Mon Sep 07, 2020 10:27 pm
TheScribe says...



I know someone probably needs to complete some of their checklist challenges, so here you go! Have fun reading this depressing short story!

Honorine's Revenge
Warning-- Language, Implied Violence
  





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Tue Sep 08, 2020 12:03 am
IamI says...



I would appreciate some in depth reviews on my short story:

Between the Stones

And I would also appreciate an in depth review on this poem:

Dystopic Visions
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Sat Sep 12, 2020 6:41 pm
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Rosewood says...



Hi, no pressure, but I'd love some feedback for my story Wildfire, parts one and two!


Wildfires (Part 1)


Wildfire (Part 2)
  





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Sat Sep 19, 2020 5:55 pm
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Rosewood says...



I'm back here again! :D

Blood Sisters - Prologue (Jose)
Embrace the glorious mess that you are.


~ Elizabeth Gilbert
  





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Wed Sep 23, 2020 9:02 pm
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TheScribe says...



I have a free style poem here--

Notorious RBG
  





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Sun Oct 11, 2020 8:22 pm
MissGangamash says...



Hey! I need help getting my last two chapters of my novel out of the green room. Can ya help me out? The Rage (Chapter 7)
  





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Mon Oct 12, 2020 10:17 am
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daniel.agranovsky says...



Hi guys,

Just wrote and published my first novel :

https://www.amazon.com/Who-Lies-Will-No ... B08KNTJ3CN

Free with Kindle Unlimited.

Lots of positivie feedback from friends and family, but it would be great to get some unbiased opinion too.

Dan.
  





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Wed Oct 28, 2020 3:14 pm
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InuYosha says...



Hi! I would like a review for the first chapter of my first Novella here, The Legend of Ikor. It's on my profile.

Thanks! :D
When life brings you down, don't care at all, because the last thing you want is life being smug over it's victory against you.


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Wed Oct 28, 2020 8:24 pm
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Rosewood says...



Hey there... no pressure but I'd love some feedback for chapters three and four of my novel, Blood Sisters.

Chapter Three

Chapter Four

(If you're not just editing, but reviewing for content, I'd still love help with my other instillations!)
Embrace the glorious mess that you are.


~ Elizabeth Gilbert
  





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Wed Nov 11, 2020 8:32 pm
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Rosewood says...



Hi, I'm back again!

Blood Sisters - Chapter 5 (Rory)

And as always, if you're not just correcting grammar, but also for inconsistencies, plot holes, etc., I recommend reading the book so far.
Embrace the glorious mess that you are.


~ Elizabeth Gilbert
  








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