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Sat Aug 22, 2015 1:13 am
yizhongt says...



hey hermione, could you please review:

Chalice of Life: Chapter 8

Thanks in advance !
  





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Mon Aug 24, 2015 8:43 pm
Stormcrow says...



Hello! Im here needing a review on my writing style, so i can do some edits

Any of my chapters are fine but i would prefer some later ones, such as 22 or 24. 25 is rather violent and rated 16+. None of the chapters have any swearing or sex

Prologue of The Token (please review! I plan on publishing it. See other chapters as well)

Chapters 1 The Token (Please review! Plan on publishing so need it)

Chapters 2 of The Token

chapter 3 of The Token

Chapter 22 of The Token

Chapter 24

Chapter 25
Caleb Julius
  





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Tue Aug 25, 2015 12:42 am
hermione315 says...



I'm all done @Lorelie. I've temporarily marked this thread as closed so I can catch up on reviews for @yizhongt and @Stormcrow (which I promise I'll get on ASAP), and when I'm finished reviewing for those people I will open it back up.
  





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Tue Dec 22, 2015 10:51 pm
hermione315 says...



My life has finally slowed back down a bit, so I'm accepting requests again! Sorry to the people who's reviews I didn't get finished.
  





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Tue Dec 22, 2015 11:06 pm
InfiniteRectangles says...



Hello! I would really appreciate if you could review my satire for me! The Creativity Epidemic It is my first satire and I could use some feedback! Thanks!
"We are, as a species, addicted to story. Even when the body goes to sleep, the mind stays up all night, telling itself stories" ~Jonathan Gottschall
  





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Wed Dec 23, 2015 1:52 am
hermione315 says...



All done @InfiniteRectangles. Your story was a good read. Anyone else?
  





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Thu Dec 24, 2015 8:31 am
yizhongt says...



Hey there, could you please review

The Chalice of Life: Chapter 11

Thanks in advance!
  








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