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Sun Jun 21, 2015 8:25 am
BellaRoma says...



Would anyone like a review? I'm feeling helpful...

I will say that I'm not terribly fussed about genre, though I do love a good thriller. All I'm saying is drop a link and I'll see what I can do.
The only thing is that I'm not the person to ask about poetry, so I would prefer to review prose (chapters or shorts).
Last edited by BellaRoma on Thu Jul 09, 2015 7:18 am, edited 1 time in total.
You cannot train yourself to notice,
To feel pain, and swallow fear
  





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Sun Jun 21, 2015 9:50 pm
EnderFlash says...



Hue hue. May I get one?

A Slightly Special Morning (But not THAT amazing)

... Is this how I ask? I don't know, I'm new to all of this...
  





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Mon Jun 22, 2015 5:31 am
BellaRoma says...



@EnderFlash, I'll look at it ASAP.
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To feel pain, and swallow fear
  





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Mon Jun 22, 2015 3:58 pm
BellaRoma says...



Done, @EnderFlash!
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Thu Jul 09, 2015 7:20 am
BellaRoma says...



Gu-uys *sing song* I don't bite, you know
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Sun Jul 12, 2015 1:31 pm
jumpingsheep says...



Hi Roma,
I have been working on a serialized story and I was hoping you could hit me up with a review! So far it has 3 chapters, and it's really the third chapter I'd like a review on, although a review on any chapter would be fantastic!

Chapter 1-- Lone Voice Radio: Part I

Chapter 2-- Lone Voice Radio: Part I

Chapter 3-- Lone Voice Radio: Part I

Thank you! You rock! :D
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Sun Jul 12, 2015 5:35 pm
BellaRoma says...



@jumpingsheep, I'll look at it
You cannot train yourself to notice,
To feel pain, and swallow fear
  





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Wed Jul 15, 2015 11:31 am
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I got the third chapter done, @jumpingsheep!

Any more requests, anybody?
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To feel pain, and swallow fear
  





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Sun Jan 10, 2016 7:58 am
BellaRoma says...



Hey, guys, chuck stuff at me!

I shall have my 100th review after four more (the fifth is reserved for @SpencerReidIsMyLife), so looking for material...
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Thu Jan 14, 2016 4:28 pm
tigeraye says...



hello. I'm still holding out hope for one more review on this short story I wrote a while back if you're up to it..

The Gift of Life
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Thu Jan 14, 2016 6:13 pm
BellaRoma says...



I will get to it when I can, okay?
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Sat Jan 16, 2016 12:11 pm
felistia says...



Hi BellaRoma, Felistia here. :D
I would love if you could review my novel Search for the Ruby of Fire. I need someone to go through and read and review all of my chapters, please. I have looked at some of your reviews and I think you are perfect person to review me. :D
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Search-for-the-Ruby-of-Fire-Chapter-1-edited-124445
  





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Sat Jan 16, 2016 1:40 pm
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BellaRoma says...



Aww, thanks... *stunned*
That will take a while, but I might to be able to review a few chapters here and there when I'm free.
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Mon Jul 11, 2016 8:32 am
Laurenh6 says...



Hey there! Is there any chance you could review

Watching

I would really appreciate some feedback .. I have no reviews xD ... Thank you :)
  





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Tue Jul 12, 2016 11:49 am
BellaRoma says...



@Laurenh6, I will get to Watching when I'm free from school.
@felistia, are there any particular chapters you want reviewed on the new draft? Idk if I can get to all of them if there's a lot... sorry :(
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