Hello Megrim! I'd appreciate a review on the first chapter of of my novel: Cedar Ravine 1.1.
The novel does have strong religious themes, but I don't consider this opening chapter to be too extreme. I understand if you cannot review it, however I really need it. >.<
I understand that Megrim is not a gentle critter. I am prepared to hear difficult things about my plot and characters, and will not be upset if I'm told to rewrite everything about it.
Hello there! I just finished writing up the second drafts of my 1st, 2nd, and 3rd chapter and I am working on the polishing the first of my fourth of my science-fantasy(maybe fiction?) novel(?). I think I’m due for some very harsh critique on my writing, as I feel like there’s a lot I can improve on that I can’t put my finger on. You can do one chapter or all, or maybe two of you want. I hope I can get some good critique on my works! Links in order of chapter are below! Take your time.
Sometimes, you want to scream for change. Other times, you just want to ask for help. But too many times, we're too afraid to speak. - Rachel (maybe inspired by someone IDK I just made it up tell me if I subconsciously copied or something)
Hey, I was hoping you could review the first few chapters of my fantasy novel I have posted on here. I have made some changes according to what other reviewers had to say, but still consider this an early draft.
I understand that Megrim is not a gentle critter. I am prepared to hear difficult things about my plot and characters, and will not be upset if I'm told to rewrite everything about it.
Hello! I have been hiding from the world finishing a draft for the past few months. I will start going through these all in the near future. Sorry for taking so long! I actually didn't check the site so didn't realize anyone had even requested anything :S
Ps... Pleeeeease reaaaaaaad the ruuuuuleeeezzzzzzz. I stated right in the first post that if you ignore them, I will ignore you.
I have an essay due this Sunday (2/18/18) and I would really like to get some opinions on it before I have to turn it in. If you don't have time to do it until after that's okay, I still love to learn and grow as a writer. In particular I want someone to double check my spelling/grammar for typos and such and recommendations on how to condense stuff (I'm over length right now lol).
Note: What I have here is just the body of the essay. I do have a copy that is formatted in APA with citations, it just isn't compatible with posting on YWS.
Disclaimer: I understand that Megrim is not a gentle critter. I am prepared to hear difficult things about my plot and characters, and will not be upset if I'm told to rewrite everything about it. Also, I really appreciate those types of reviews. So gimme whatever you got!
Disclaimer: I understand that Megrim is not a gentle critter. I am prepared to hear difficult things about my plot and characters, and will not be upset if I'm told to rewrite everything about it.
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith
Disclaimer: I understand that Megrim is not a gentle critter. I am prepared to hear difficult things about my plot and characters, and will not be upset if I'm told to rewrite everything about it.
Okay, so I'm not sure if my book would fall under religious or spiritual because heaven and hell do play a part but it's kind of the background, it's more about the characters in it. If you don't want to review, you don't have to!
I understand that Megrim is not a gentle critter. I am prepared to hear difficult things about my plot and characters, and will not be upset if I'm told to rewrite everything about it.
thank you <3
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