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Mon Aug 29, 2016 6:17 pm
AnarchyWolf says...



Hello Megrim. I was wondering if you could possibly review the fourth chapter of my story?
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Fri Sep 02, 2016 11:32 pm
Megrim says...



Done with that one! (But I'll review the rest of the chapters too)

MOAR REVIEW REQUESTS! Megrim needs stories to nom. Tell your friends.
  





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Sat Sep 03, 2016 2:41 am
Costa says...



Are you free to tackle a big novel? Because I've one up to chapter 24 (currently over 100k words, FYI). It's often undergoing edits, so I could always use more input.

Here's the prologue and first chapter. I'll be extremely thankful if you're willing to go through it all but I'll also understand if you're not - it IS a pretty lengthy piece.

Cheers. :)
  





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Sat Sep 03, 2016 2:43 pm
Megrim says...



Oh that is pretty big! No worries. I'll chip away at it. Just may take some time.
  





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Sun Sep 25, 2016 11:33 am
felistia says...



Hi @Megrim. :D I hope you're up for another novel. :D

It's a Fantasy\Action\Adventure story.

The average word count for each chapter is about 900 words or so per chapter.

I currently have four chapters and a prologue in my Thunder and Ice novel, but I'd really like if someone could follow and review the story as a I write it.

Here are the links. I hope you like it. :D

Thunder and Ice Prologue ~ A Heart of Ice

Thunder and Ice Chapter 1 ~ The Lightning Talon

Thunder and Ice Chapter 2 The News

Thunder and Ice Chapter 3 ~ Songa

Thunder and Ice Chapter 4 ~ Malanka's Training
  





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Sun Sep 25, 2016 11:53 am
Megrim says...



Sounds good! I'm still plugging away at War of Dawn, but there aren't too many chapters of that left. Be onto yours soon!
  





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Sun Sep 25, 2016 12:44 pm
felistia says...



Thanks. No hurry. :D
  





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Tue Sep 27, 2016 9:54 pm
Debbiekay says...



I've written a book.please help me review it.please do,help in my grammar.
it's teen fiction.
  





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Tue Sep 27, 2016 10:58 pm
Megrim says...



Can you link it? I don't see anything public in your portfolio.
  





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Sun Oct 02, 2016 4:08 pm
geoffles says...



Hey Megrim! Don't suppose you could read any of my short stories (besides Ten Minutes Before) and review one? Whatever strikes your fancy. No pressure though! *sweats nervously*
just got back from a long break due to reasons. if i owe you something please let me know as i honestly don't remember. im sorry, im sorry, im sorry.
  





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Sun Oct 02, 2016 5:11 pm
Megrim says...



Ok I might do more than one! I'll slot it into the queue :)
  





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Sun Oct 02, 2016 8:40 pm
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Megrim wrote:Ok I might do more than one! I'll slot it into the queue :)



thank you!
just got back from a long break due to reasons. if i owe you something please let me know as i honestly don't remember. im sorry, im sorry, im sorry.
  





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Mon Oct 03, 2016 1:24 am
Megrim says...



Ok all done with War of Dawn, and stopped by geoffles to review a few shorts quickly! Onto Thunder and Ice, and room for more stories in my queue!
  





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Mon Oct 03, 2016 11:36 pm
Megrim says...



All done! Goodness, have I run out of things to review?!

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Thu Oct 06, 2016 1:55 pm
Charm says...



Hey! Can you review and follow my novel Atana? It's a sci-fi mystery novel. So far I have three chapters on YWS, but I'm writing the fourth now.

Atana: Chapter 1 (1316 words)
Atana: Chapter 2 (841 words)
Atana: Chapter 3 (1501 words)

Thanks <3
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