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Mon Sep 02, 2019 9:56 am
wetumbrella6 says...


I would be glad if you can review the first chapter of my novel named "Jaime".

It is 9k words long.

Here's the link to it:

Jaime (working title) chapter 1

thanks so much for considering

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Tue Oct 01, 2019 3:27 am
Fishr says...


I am in search of a pair of eyes who have experience with character development and flow. This is a short story, historical fiction, but don’t worry, it’s not daunting. It is graphic because the theme is how my main character was born. I hope you’re ready to sink your fangs into something a little different. 😊

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Mon Nov 11, 2019 8:08 am
Jude085 says...

can you please review my work.

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Thu Jan 16, 2020 7:53 pm
Miraculor77 says...

Hi! I was wondering if you could check out my novel, Code: Delete. It has 16 chapters so far. Here's the link to the folder in my portfolio where I keep the chapters:

The most recent chapter is at the top and the following chapters are in numerical order.

You don't have to review everything, but I would really appreciate it if you could review my more recent chapters.

- Mira
I'd rather die than live without passion.
- Jungkook

I do reviews: Reviews by Mira

In a hole in the ground there lived a hobbit. Not a nasty, dirty, wet hole, filled with the ends of worms and an oozy smell, nor yet a dry, bare, sandy hole with nothing in it to sit down on or to eat: it was a hobbit-hole, and that means comfort.
— JRR Tolkien