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Mon Sep 02, 2019 9:56 am
wetumbrella6 says...



Hi.

I would be glad if you can review the first chapter of my novel named "Jaime".

It is 9k words long.

Here's the link to it:

Jaime (working title) chapter 1

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Tue Oct 01, 2019 3:27 am
Fishr says...



Hello!

I am in search of a pair of eyes who have experience with character development and flow. This is a short story, historical fiction, but don’t worry, it’s not daunting. It is graphic because the theme is how my main character was born. I hope you’re ready to sink your fangs into something a little different. 😊

British Love, Boston Affection (part II) (Rated R)
  





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Mon Nov 11, 2019 8:08 am
Jude085 says...



can you please review my work.
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