Young Writers Society

Hi.

I would be glad if you can review the first chapter of my novel named "Jaime".

It is 9k words long.

Here's the link to it:

Jaime (working title) chapter 1

thanks so much for considering

Hello!

I am in search of a pair of eyes who have experience with character development and flow. This is a short story, historical fiction, but don’t worry, it’s not daunting. It is graphic because the theme is how my main character was born. I hope you’re ready to sink your fangs into something a little different. 😊

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can you please review my work.
Scar

Hi! I was wondering if you could check out my novel, Code: Delete. It has 16 chapters so far. Here's the link to the folder in my portfolio where I keep the chapters:

profile/Miraculor77/portfolio/474462
The most recent chapter is at the top and the following chapters are in numerical order.

You don't have to review everything, but I would really appreciate it if you could review my more recent chapters.

- Mira