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Sun Jun 28, 2015 9:48 am
steampowered says...



@LeftyWriter Reviewed! :D
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Sun Sep 13, 2015 10:33 am
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Hi stempowered thanks for reviewing my first work. Would you please review the second chapter as well? The Ripper ? Who is that ? (chapter 2)
It was actually written before your review so some mistakes ar still there. :p :p
  





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Sun Sep 13, 2015 10:47 am
steampowered says...



@One Reviewed!
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Sun Sep 13, 2015 10:53 am
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Thanks a lot !
  





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Sun Sep 13, 2015 2:27 pm
tigeraye says...



Hi, I'd like to read your review on this short story I wrote, "Statistics". Thanks.

Statistics
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Sun Sep 13, 2015 3:48 pm
steampowered says...



@tigeraye This has now been reviewed. :)
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Fri Feb 12, 2016 11:05 am
steampowered says...



Bumpity bump. Could do with some blue stars. ;)
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Sat Feb 13, 2016 12:46 pm
Costa says...



Me, please! This is my first work ever so I'm trying to get as much feedback as I can while I write the next parts.

War of Dawn - Prologue and Chapter 1

War of Dawn - Chapter 2

Thanks!
  





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Sat Feb 13, 2016 2:14 pm
steampowered says...



@Costa Both have been reviewed! :)
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Tue Feb 16, 2016 2:51 pm
Costa says...



Hey there Steamy,

added a new chapter to my story, if you'd be interested in taking a stab at it.

War of Dawn - Chapter 3

Thanks, mate.
  





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Tue Feb 16, 2016 4:26 pm
steampowered says...



@Costa Reviewed it! :)
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Wed Feb 17, 2016 6:29 pm
dracowave says...



Hey steamy I have a novel I have been writing for a while i would be very thankful if you could review my first chapter for me and give me a few tips on how I can improve my writing. Thanks and have a nice day. work/dracowave/The-Seven-Heavenly-Kings-Revamped-127074
  





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Wed Feb 17, 2016 7:11 pm
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@dracowave Reviewed! :)
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Thu Feb 18, 2016 1:32 pm
na3f says...



Hi steampowered,

I would be thankful if you could please review the first chapter of a novel I just started:

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/na3f/Brother-Moon-Sister-Sun--Chapter-1-127285
  





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Thu Feb 18, 2016 2:06 pm
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@na3f This has been reviewed! :D
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