So I see you said that you start at the beginning of the novel, so if you REALLY wanna do that then chapter 1 is in that folder as well -- however, that seems a bit excessive to read 22 chapters of background just for a one chapter request so I'll just give you a summary and see if that's enough
So, basic summary so far...
Spoiler! :
Jerica is a 16 year old assassin and niece to the King of Atra. In a war with the neighboring country, Niap, she bites off more than she can chew battle wise and gets herself captured. The king of Niap sentences her to go before the dragon that lives on a mountain in their country for judgment.
The soldier who was put in charge of leading the troop of soldiers that escorted her up the mountain is named Lieutenant General Eloonta. He physically abused her pretty badly and it's pretty impossible for her to hate him anymore than she already does.
When she gets to the mountain she is met with Aerik, the dragon keeper, who has been consistently foiling her attempts to escape. She also has a bit of a squabble with the dragon himself, Kaidren.
In the last chapter, Aerik told Jerica that a town, Elmirana, in her home country is under attack and offered to let her come with him to rescue the village. He then transported her to there, which causes nausea (for reasons I set up earlier in the novel and don't super matter now but I figured I'd mention so that the first couple of lines of this chapter makes more sense).
If you /want/ to read on through chapter 25 that would be great 'cause I'd love for my chapters to get out of the Green Room so that I can post more without guilt, but I know it's super tacky to request more than one review at a time so no pressure at all if you're not feeling it Thanks!
"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
@ShadowVyper Thank you so much for the summary! That really helped out a lot ^^ and I will look at the rest of the chapters in the green room, but no promises on reviewing them as of right now ^^
"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
Hey! I have a chapter with no reviews - chapter 4 in my novel - and I'd like to know what you think of it. Here's the link to the first chapter: Part 1: Monte Escuro Where I didn't quite have a direction or an idea what I am doing, but if you want to start for the beginning, go for it; And that's the link for the fourth chapter, if you want to read this only: Part 4: Water Plus Laptop
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Hi! If you could review this, that would be awesome!
"Be yourself; everyone else is already taken" "Just because you're trash doesn't mean you can't do big things; It's trash can, not trash can't" Cowards die many times before their deaths; the valiant never taste of death but once
Hello there, everyone! This is now (tentatively) back open!
I am looking for three new novels to follow
I am not looking for anything else to review right now, as these novels will take up all of my tentative free reviewing schedule.
What are the parameters and what will this entail?
I would like to have at least five chapters published overall
I would also like to see a chapter or two published within the last two weeks. This shows that you are committed to writing the novel so I can be committed to reading and reviewing ^^
I will start at the beginning, and review at most once a week. I might review a little bit less if life gets more chaotic, but I will try to keep that once a week review. This might keep me behind on your publishing schedule, but you'll have a consistent reviewer.
My reviews tend to focus on how impactful your beginnings and chapter endings are, the overall flow of the chapter, the story and plot, and a bit of character study. I rarely talk about grammar or spelling unless it catches me up on my reading.
Here's a review for a late chapter (this means that we're halfway through the story or far enough that you and I have garnered a dialogue and foundation for me to have a more personalized review)
@Vincian heyo do i just request here? I have a novel that I would love getting more reviews for and it fits your parameters (it's just not in the green room anymore)
Why should Caesar just get to stomp around like a giant while the rest of us try not to get smushed under his big feet? Brutus is just as cute as Caesar, right? Brutus is just as smart as Caesar, people totally like Brutus just as much as they like Caesar, and when did it become okay for one person to be the boss of everybody because that's not what Rome is about! We should totally just stab Caesar! — Gretchen Wieners
Thanks!
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