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Sat Dec 22, 2018 9:04 am
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Done @Elinor!

@Rascalover I will definitely take a look! If anything, I'll read the first two parts and review the second two parts ^^
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Wed Jan 02, 2019 2:28 am
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@Elinor and @Rascalover I have reviewed every part of your works!

I'm now free and wanting some more requests! So bring them to me ^^
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Wed Jan 02, 2019 4:36 pm
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Heyo! So Many Lost Ones - IV has been in the Green Room for awhile - Will you mind reading and reviewing it?

Thanks!

So Many Lost Ones - IV (Fin)
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Thu Jan 03, 2019 12:23 am
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@manilla donezo!
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ShadowVyper says...



Omni! I see that you're all caught up so would you like another request to fuel your Rampage? ;)

Before the Dragon - Chapter 23 (LMS IV)

So I see you said that you start at the beginning of the novel, so if you REALLY wanna do that then chapter 1 is in that folder as well -- however, that seems a bit excessive to read 22 chapters of background just for a one chapter request so I'll just give you a summary and see if that's enough ;)

So, basic summary so far...

Spoiler! :
Jerica is a 16 year old assassin and niece to the King of Atra. In a war with the neighboring country, Niap, she bites off more than she can chew battle wise and gets herself captured. The king of Niap sentences her to go before the dragon that lives on a mountain in their country for judgment.

The soldier who was put in charge of leading the troop of soldiers that escorted her up the mountain is named Lieutenant General Eloonta. He physically abused her pretty badly and it's pretty impossible for her to hate him anymore than she already does.

When she gets to the mountain she is met with Aerik, the dragon keeper, who has been consistently foiling her attempts to escape. She also has a bit of a squabble with the dragon himself, Kaidren.

In the last chapter, Aerik told Jerica that a town, Elmirana, in her home country is under attack and offered to let her come with him to rescue the village. He then transported her to there, which causes nausea (for reasons I set up earlier in the novel and don't super matter now but I figured I'd mention so that the first couple of lines of this chapter makes more sense).


If you /want/ to read on through chapter 25 that would be great 'cause I'd love for my chapters to get out of the Green Room so that I can post more without guilt, but I know it's super tacky to request more than one review at a time so no pressure at all if you're not feeling it :) Thanks!
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Fri Jan 11, 2019 6:07 am
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@ShadowVyper Thank you so much for the summary! That really helped out a lot ^^ and I will look at the rest of the chapters in the green room, but no promises on reviewing them as of right now ^^
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