I have reviewed Chapter One (Not sure of the title yet =P) at long last. Sorry it took me so long. Have a great day and thanks for requesting a review from the dragon.
"Every writer I know has trouble writing." - Joseph Heller
~ A word to the wise ain't necessary, it's the stupid ones who need advice.~ - Bill Cosby
Hello, I would like a review on my latest chapter. Honestly speaking, i'm not really interested in grammar reviews. I want the real deal; an actually review where you can tell me if my writing sucks or not. I need it. Thanks in advance
For in everything it is no easy task to find the middle ... anyone can get angry—that is easy—or give or spend money; but to do this to the right person, to the right extent, at the right time, with the right motive, and in the right way, that is not for everyone, nor is it easy; wherefore goodness is both rare and laudable and noble. — Aristotle
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