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Sat Apr 18, 2015 9:45 pm
Dragongirl says...



Hello, you have clicked on the right reviewer!

I am 12 reviews away from getting my next star so I am super motivated to review. :D

When I review your work I will point any grammar problems or typos I catch but I prefer to review the story, it's flow and the characters! I strive to be positive but honest at the same time.

Please let me review your stories!!!

Dragongirl
Last edited by Dragongirl on Thu Jul 16, 2015 1:15 am, edited 5 times in total.
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Mon Apr 20, 2015 10:25 pm
RedMoon says...



Hey, I would like a review on my new story. I don't care how brutally honest you are. Please. I need to get better!

Here's the link:

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/RedMoon/Rayas-Heritage-Chapter-One-120547

Thanks!
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Mon Apr 20, 2015 11:37 pm
Dragongirl says...



Hey Redmoon, I will review your story tonight. I am at work right now so it may be a little later. :)

-Edited- Review done!!! I want more!!!
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Wed Apr 22, 2015 5:54 pm
gauravkundu32 says...



Please review this work of mine
The Real You
Always Hope for the BEST
  





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Wed Apr 22, 2015 6:41 pm
TheSparringPanther says...



Eh, if possible, could you review my work then? :~

House Red - Chapter 1: Preparations
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Fri Apr 24, 2015 7:22 pm
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@gauravkundu32 , The Real You is reviewed!
"Every writer I know has trouble writing." - Joseph Heller

~ A word to the wise ain't necessary, it's the stupid ones who need advice.~
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Fri Apr 24, 2015 8:50 pm
Dragongirl says...



@TheSparringPanther,

Red House Chapter 1 has been reviewed!
"Every writer I know has trouble writing." - Joseph Heller

~ A word to the wise ain't necessary, it's the stupid ones who need advice.~
- Bill Cosby
  





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Fri Apr 24, 2015 8:51 pm
Dragongirl says...



I must have more! Feed the dragon!!!
"Every writer I know has trouble writing." - Joseph Heller

~ A word to the wise ain't necessary, it's the stupid ones who need advice.~
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Wed Apr 29, 2015 10:13 am
gauravkundu32 says...



Thank you so much Dragongirl for your detailed review.
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Wed Apr 29, 2015 9:52 pm
Dragongirl says...



gauravkundu32@

It was my pleasure! If you would like anything else reviewed let me know! :)
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Sun May 03, 2015 5:53 pm
MissGangamash says...



Hey! Could you please check out and review my novel? You've already read the prologue and you said you enjoyed it but you didn't read any more. I really need as many opinions on my work as I can get because I want to self-publish. I need people helping me get it as good as I can and spot my typos because I'm rubbish at editing my own work!

Here's the link to the first chapter : The Progeny: Chapter 1 (Revised)

If you don't have time to review multiple chapters or don't want to read a whole novel, could you review one of the latest chapters? Because they have the least reviews.

Thanks you!

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Mon May 04, 2015 6:49 pm
Dragongirl says...



@MissGangamash okay, so how 'bout we make a deal? I will review a chapter at a time of your story. After I review a chapter of your story and you have seen the review. You come back here and post the next link. That way I stay modivated and this post get bumped up.
I am at work right now but I will review the first chapter when I get home today.
:) What you say? Deal?
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Mon May 04, 2015 8:03 pm
MissGangamash says...



That sounds great to me :D Is there anything you want me to review of yours to repay the favour?
  





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Tue May 05, 2015 1:52 am
Dragongirl says...



@MissGangamash,

Chapter 1 is reviewed!

It is super nice of you to offer to review in return. You don't have to at all but if you want to. You could review any of the chapters of my story The Bully

The Bully. Chapter 1.

Here is a link to the first chapter.
"Every writer I know has trouble writing." - Joseph Heller

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Thu May 07, 2015 7:00 pm
MissGangamash says...



Thanks for the review on Chapter 1 :D

I've reviewed the first chapter of The Bully for you.

Here's the link to Chapter 2: The Progeny : Chapter 2
  








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