I have reviewed Chapter One (Not sure of the title yet =P) at long last. Sorry it took me so long. Have a great day and thanks for requesting a review from the dragon.
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Hello, I would like a review on my latest chapter. Honestly speaking, i'm not really interested in grammar reviews. I want the real deal; an actually review where you can tell me if my writing sucks or not. I need it. Thanks in advance
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