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Reaching for my third star: Reviews by Flash!



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Sun Mar 15, 2015 6:54 pm
AttackOfTheFlash says...



Hello, I'm Flash. Here's a bit of information about my reviews.

Style:
-I try to help the writer by pointing out all the grammar and technical issues I can find. Then, I will go over story content, characters, etc. Warning: I can be nitpicky. And I promise I'll always have something nice to say. I'm not blunt or mean.

What I will review:
-Short stories (if multiple parts please link to the first part first!)
-Novel chapters (if you give me a certain chapter number, please link me to the first one first!)
-Almost any genre
What I will NOT review:
-Poems/lyrics
-Heavy romance (light romance is okay though)
-Works that include heavy language

Help me get my third review star! I look forward to reading your stories! :)

Note: It may take a few days for me to get to your review. But I promise it will get done.
Are you living or simply existing?
  





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Mon Mar 16, 2015 12:07 pm
AttackOfTheFlash says...



Any takers?
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Tue Mar 17, 2015 3:30 pm
yizhongt says...



Hey Flash, I'm writing a sic-fi story and it would be nice if you could review them. I have three chapters in total, but this is the link to the first one.

Celestial: Spark of War; Prologue & Chapter 1
  





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Tue Mar 17, 2015 3:42 pm
psudiname says...



Can you review the first chapter to my novel? I would really appreciate it!

To The Stars Above (chapter 1)
if anyone wants a review, post on my profile and I'll get to it in a couple days.
  





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Tue Mar 17, 2015 4:04 pm
AttackOfTheFlash says...



@yizhongt and @psudiname I will review both of your stories as soon as possible! (When I have access to a computer)
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Thu Mar 19, 2015 12:53 am
AttackOfTheFlash says...



@yizhongt and @psudiname Done! Hope you two enjoy your reviews. Sorry about the lateness of my review, psudiname. I really meant to have it done earlier.

Anyone else?
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Thu Mar 19, 2015 1:55 am
yizhongt says...



Well if you could review the other two chapters of Celestial that would be great. Plus you'll be closer to that third star.
  





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Thu Mar 19, 2015 10:16 am
AttackOfTheFlash says...



@yizhongt I will do that as soon as I can. It will probably be later today or tomorrow when I get both of them done.
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He began to wonder why he had felt uneasy at all. It was like a man wondering in broad daylight why a dream had appeared so terrible to him at night.
— Chinua Achebe, Things Fall Apart