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Thu Mar 12, 2015 2:59 pm
rachellecarter says...



Hello everyone! :D

I'm Rachelle and I will give you reviews on your writing. You don't need to give me anything in return (unless you want to ;) ). But I have a few rules.

1) I WILL NOT review anything that has inappropriate content. Nothing rated 16+. I will read stories that have mild violence, but nothing raunchy. I just don't need those ideas in my head.

2) I will practically review anything. I am not good at reviewing non-fiction, but I could try (Don't expect it to be perfect). My best are short stories and poetry.

3) I am not going to fluff it up. Which means for me, I won't tell you how wonderful you are unless the piece is practically flawless. I will point out the good, the bad, what could improve, and what you did right. I'm not some mean critic that never finds anything good. I just know what it's like to have someone review your story and never actually review it. I don't want to do that to anyone.


If you post the link to your story, I will try to get it reviewed ASAP. I am on most every day, so I will see it. It won't take more than two or three days to get you the review.

Happy writing,

Rachelle
  





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Thu Mar 12, 2015 3:13 pm
AttackOfTheFlash says...



If you'd like, you can review anything in my portfolio. I've got a two-part short story, a prologue, and a first chapter. (I'm not going to post links because I really don't care which one is reviewed.)
Although they've all got a few reviews already, so only if you want to. :)
Are you living or simply existing?
  





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Thu Mar 12, 2015 3:55 pm
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rachellecarter says...



AttackOfTheFlash, it's done. Hope you like it!
  





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Sun Mar 15, 2015 8:50 am
haven235 says...



Fleshing out another song idea.

9/2/05

Thanks.
  





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Mon Mar 16, 2015 4:02 pm
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haven235, it's done! Hope you like it.
  





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Tue Mar 17, 2015 3:30 pm
psudiname says...



Can you review the first chapter of my novel? I'd really appreciate it!

To The Stars Above (chapter 1)
if anyone wants a review, post on my profile and I'll get to it in a couple days.
  





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Tue Mar 17, 2015 4:25 pm
rachellecarter says...



psudiname, its done.
  





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Sun Mar 22, 2015 4:02 pm
sharoze says...



Hey Rachelle, review my poem if you have time. Cheers.
  





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Tue Mar 24, 2015 4:33 am
Kanome says...



Hello. I wanted to start back on writing this series, but I need some reviews on the first few chapters. Thank you!
Life Behind Regrets [Prologue] - Edited
PROTECTOR OF LIGHT
Knight of the Green Room
  





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Thu Apr 09, 2015 2:07 pm
jessachegg says...



Hello, could you review my poem Mother Mother? Thanks!
  








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