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Thu Jan 29, 2015 4:37 am
Theodorable says...



Hey everyone! I'm looking to start reviewing again. So send me your links. I will review anything, I'm not picky. Depending on how much I get, I will try to do at least 2 reviews on week nights and 4 on the weekends.
Driver picks the music, shotgun shuts his cake hole. -Dean, Supernatural
  





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Fri Jan 30, 2015 3:23 am
rainforest says...



Hey Teddy! I was wondering if you can review this poem?

Love Song

If so, thank you so much!
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Fri Jan 30, 2015 4:54 pm
Lefty says...



Hey, there! I've just started posting revised chapters of my novel, The Fighter of Aldea. I currently have four chapters up (split into 8 short-ish parts). I would love it if you could review! It's up to you if you want to follow it or just review the first part. Whichever floats your boat. Thanks!

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Hear me out, there's so much more to life than what you're feeling now. Someday you'll look back on all these days, and all this pain is gonna be invisible. - Hunter Hayes
  





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Sat Jan 31, 2015 5:09 pm
Theodorable says...



@CaptainSaltWater done

@LeftyWriter done
Driver picks the music, shotgun shuts his cake hole. -Dean, Supernatural
  





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Mon Feb 02, 2015 9:13 pm
guineapiggirl says...



Deciding to Die

Hiya! I would love this short story to be reviewed :) I've been told to "add in setting" specifically, but anything else you think needs improving I'd love to hear!
  





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Sun Feb 22, 2015 4:03 am
Theodorable says...



@guineapiggirl Done

If anyone else would like to submit anything, I'm free.
Driver picks the music, shotgun shuts his cake hole. -Dean, Supernatural
  





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Wed Mar 04, 2015 1:41 am
Inked says...



Hey do you think you would review my new chapters. I just started the first is called
English:intro
and the first chapter is
English:Entry 1
Only if you got time :)
To be or not to be?
I choose not to be...~Inked :pirate3:
  





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Wed Mar 04, 2015 6:54 pm
rachellecarter says...



Hey! I hope you're okay with reviewing my story. I explained it's genre with the story. It's a chapter book for kids.

Here's a link to it.

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/rachellecarter/Crown-Prince-Derek-and-the-Dragon-119456

(I'm new here so IDK how to do a normal link. Sorry. :| )
  








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