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Sat Mar 07, 2015 7:38 pm
Pretzelstick says...



I did it, wrote your review!
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Mon May 04, 2015 10:05 pm
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Imma ready to roar and review! Does anyone want a review from the Lion Princess Leo? :D
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Sat May 09, 2015 4:52 pm
Afternight says...



Hey Pretzel.
I was wondering you could review my work.
it's a really short short story :-D
Inevitable Outcome Part 01: Flight (Edited)
thanks
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Mon Jun 08, 2015 7:58 am
artybirdy says...



@Pretzelsing

I'm not a poet, but I have started trying my hand on poems. This is my most recent work that I'm actually proud of.

Father Doesn't Like The Noise *Edited*

TRIGGER WARNING: CONTENT ABOUT ABUSE

Thanks!
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Mon Jun 08, 2015 12:48 pm
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@ArtStyx

Spoiler! :
Sorry but I can't read it because of that trigger warning.
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Mon Jun 08, 2015 3:14 pm
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@Pretzelsing

Oh, it's fine! Don't worry about it. :)

I'm sorry for causing you any trouble.
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Thu Jul 02, 2015 3:49 pm
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*bumps up this thread to show off her updated and colorful first post*
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Thu Jul 02, 2015 11:11 pm
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Yes @yizhongt- I will be glad to read through it and critique it. Will submit the review to you soon!

EDIT: Already submitted.
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Tue Aug 25, 2015 1:41 am
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Please review When Dream and Reality Collide [Chapter 1.1] for me! :)
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Tue Aug 25, 2015 2:19 am
yizhongt says...



Hey Pretzelsing, could you please review:

Chalice of Life: Chapter 8

Could you please focus on my past/present tense. Thank you !!
  





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Tue Sep 08, 2015 2:57 pm
elysian says...



darn, the work I wanted reviewed is 16+ <.>
elysian: (adj.) beautiful or creative; divinely inspired; peaceful and perfect.

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Sun Sep 27, 2015 12:01 am
Lorelie says...



3 In proper english love means heart sickness

If you feel like it, can you review Chapter two too, please?

(I know you'll want to review the previous chapters, but please don't read the Prologue. Please)

Umm, can you check word choice, sentence structure and all the forgotten details for me? Also, I'd like you to tell me what you think will happen next, and your favourite moments.

Cheers!
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Thu Oct 29, 2015 8:21 pm
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@Lylas, if you really want me to, let me go ahead and take a look at it.

@Lorelie and @yizhongt sorry about taking forever but I just totally forgot. Will work on it this week/next week.
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Sun Nov 01, 2015 10:05 am
lawrence says...



can you help me with this one please? Dececption - Chapter One - Words Betray
  








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