Hi PretzelStick, I know that I have asked for a review on my story before, but I would love if you could read the whole story. Pretty please. I found your last review very helpful and could use more on the rest of my chapters. Same story as before, though I have changed the name. Search for the Ruby of Fire.
@leslieloo. You have to link me to your story in order for me to review it. I have better things to do than go through the links in your portfolio. Thanks!
A reader lives a thousand lives before he dies. The man who never reads only lives once ~George R. Martin Life isn't about finding yourself; it's about recreating yourself. ~George B. Shaw
P.S. you said you were kind of careful about what you read so I'm going to clear up the big about the drugs. They're not actual drugs, they're medical drugs needed for the 'race' in question to survive.
A reader lives a thousand lives before he dies. The man who never reads only lives once ~George R. Martin Life isn't about finding yourself; it's about recreating yourself. ~George B. Shaw
A reader lives a thousand lives before he dies. The man who never reads only lives once ~George R. Martin Life isn't about finding yourself; it's about recreating yourself. ~George B. Shaw
A reader lives a thousand lives before he dies. The man who never reads only lives once ~George R. Martin Life isn't about finding yourself; it's about recreating yourself. ~George B. Shaw
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