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Golden Pretzel Gears



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Tue Mar 22, 2016 3:08 am
Glauke says...



Hey, I'd love a review on my poem Endgame! Thanks so much :)
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be still, sad heart, and cease repining
behind the clouds is the sun still shining
  





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Mon Nov 06, 2017 10:11 pm
Pretzelstick says...



Reopened my services again! Please feel free to flood me with the requests rollin in :d
A reader lives a thousand lives before he dies. The man who never reads only lives once
~George R. Martin
Life isn't about finding yourself; it's about recreating yourself. ~George B. Shaw

got yws?
  





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Wed Jan 17, 2018 3:03 pm
WanderlustStardust says...



Aa hello! I would like this to be reviewed if that isn't too much trouble at all~

Thank you in advance!!
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"I'm so happy you exist"
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Sat Jan 20, 2018 8:19 pm
camusic says...



Hey, could you review Seltas's first kill I promise it's not gorry! I personly hate reading that kind of stuff... and I'd rather a critic over a wow that's so great kinda thing if that makes any sense.
Thanks in advance.
  








I always knew that deep down in every human heart, there is mercy and generosity. No one is born hating another person because of the color of his skin, or his background, or his religion. People must learn to hate, and if they can learn to hate, they can be taught to love, for love comes more naturally to the human heart than its opposite.
— Nelson Mandela, Long Walk to Freedom