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Tue Nov 11, 2014 12:35 am
Monsters says...



This is not for the scardy cat, the faint of heart or the emotional - monsters are scary and I am a monster. Reviews here are honest but only because people who want to improve also want something they can 'take home.' Be not willing but wanting to take criticisms before you post here.

Go here to see how I review and my reviewing style: profile/Monsters/reviews

Lastly, if writing a short story or a novel, I may choose to not review the piece.

You have been warned.

Comment with or without a link below and I will review when I have time.


Thank you,
Monsters
Last edited by Monsters on Wed Jan 20, 2016 5:24 am, edited 4 times in total.
  





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Sun Nov 23, 2014 4:59 pm
LadySpark says...



Do your worst.

there's a wreath on the side of route 66
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


-Richard Siken


Formerly SparkToFlame
  





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Thu Dec 04, 2014 5:39 pm
Kajka says...



Hey, it would be awesome if you could review my poem "Hope" or "The Struggle". I want to know what people think about my work. :) I'm not sure what you can focus on; I guess whatever catches your eye. I'm still fairly new on this site. :) Thanks mate!
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Mon Jul 06, 2015 4:17 pm
Poopsie says...



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Mon Jul 06, 2015 5:01 pm
hermione315 says...



I like how honest your reviews are. Rip it to shreds, Monsters :)

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Thu Jul 09, 2015 3:21 pm
Megrim says...



Chomp away, Monsters. Chomp chomp.

With Only the Rainforest As Witness
  





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Wed Jan 20, 2016 5:21 am
Monsters says...



reopened (after accidentally closing thread for a while)
  





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Wed Jan 20, 2016 5:58 pm
Lightsong says...



Please review In Another God’s Land! Thanks! :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Tue Feb 02, 2016 4:16 am
SpiritedWolfe says...



//sneaks in
I'd really appreciate a shredding ^^ ~ (if you're still accepting of course.) perfect on the surface, broken at the seams
[insert really cool and fun quote here]
Check out my novel shenanigans.
Or request a review from me.

[she/her]
  








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