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Anyone need review for their Poems and Short stories



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Sun Nov 09, 2014 1:31 am
bisshoy says...



I am new IN YWS! so anybody want any review comment here :)
  





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Sat Nov 15, 2014 7:50 pm
Irrlichtchen says...



Hi, I am new here too and I would be glad if you could review my short story "Clawing Stroke"
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Daddy Long Legs are more closely related to crabs than spiders and somehow the idea of crablike creatures with spider legs that have escaped the entrappings of the primordial sea and now crawl over land and can walk up and down walls and ceilings creeps me more than I can adequately describe.
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