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Reviewing Inspiration for a Wolfe



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Sun Jul 20, 2014 6:01 pm
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SpiritedWolfe says...



So, I've decided that the inspiration I need to review will come from making a commitment to someone for a review rather than just wandering around looking for works that need them.

[This is still true, 6 years later.]

I will review anything prose, from novels (even later chapters!), to short stories, to essays. However, I am not nearly as comfortable reviewing poetry. You're welcome to request poetry reviews, but they will likely be more commentary of the meaning/idea of the poem, than the writing of the poem itself.

Another exception that I will make is if there are already five or more wonderful reviews on it (basically a work with five reviews with 1,000+ characters and aren't made of fluff I will not review.) Language/Violence doesn't bother me, so don't worry about that.

If you want, you can specify what you want from a review (content, grammar, character development, etc.) so I know how to make the best quality review I can. Hope I can help you guys out!
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Sun Jul 20, 2014 9:17 pm
windrattlestheblinds says...



I'd love a review on Monachopsis if you've got the time.




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Fri Jan 08, 2021 6:44 am
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SpiritedWolfe says...



I want to go ahead and give this a great big bump, so people know it's alright to request in here :)
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Sat Jan 09, 2021 4:26 pm
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Ducklinstories says...



https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Ducklinstories/Thief-Of-Dust-And-Dawn-149918 I would really appreciate of you coul give it a quick review?!

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Sat Jan 09, 2021 9:02 pm
SpiritedWolfe says...



@Ducklinstories Your piece has been reviewed ^^
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Tue Feb 16, 2021 3:22 am
ForeverYoung299 says...



Hello. Review Cortez Shivick( Chapter 1)




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Wed Feb 17, 2021 6:52 pm
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SpiritedWolfe says...



Hi @1234, I've reviewed your piece :) Since you requested the review before it had 5 reviews, I went ahead and left one, but keep in mind that I won't typically take requests for pieces that already have 5+ reviews on it ^^ Just keep that in mind when requesting from multiple people.
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Wed Feb 17, 2021 8:03 pm
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MailicedeNamedy says...



Hi SpiritedWolfe,

could you maybe write a review for my chapter excerpt Longing of a Maiden Rose - Ch.I: Unforgotten Murder 3? Grammar and content would be my preference.

Greetings,

Mailice
Reality is a prison and time is its guard

I´m just a random girl with gentle manners

Every bad voice in your head was once outside




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Thu Feb 18, 2021 2:15 pm
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SpiritedWolfe says...



@MailicedeNamedy, I had actually read the first couple of sections and wanted to leave a few reviews on them, but I hadn't had the time to dedicate to leave a proper review like I've wanted, haha. Do you want me to go back and review the earlier chapters before this one as well?
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Thu Feb 18, 2021 6:53 pm
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MailicedeNamedy says...



@SpiritedWolfe

If you really have the time to review these too, that would be super nice! Especially since most of them have already been corrected and revised a bit, a second eye certainly couldn't hurt.
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Thu Mar 04, 2021 2:21 pm
ForeverYoung299 says...



Hello. Pls review Cortez Shivick (Chapter 1)




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Tue Mar 30, 2021 9:38 pm
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SpiritedWolfe says...



Hi guys! Very sorry for being late to these. School had gotten really busy for me, but I want to find time to continue your requests. @ForeverYoung299, are you still looking for a review on your chapter?
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Thu Apr 15, 2021 3:01 pm
ForeverYoung299 says...



Hello!! Can u pls review Act 1(The badminton field)
I want review on content, plot and character development, specifically. Anything else would also be appreciated.




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Fri May 21, 2021 3:57 am
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Alright! I'm all caught up and ready to accept new requests if anyone has them :)
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Fri Jul 02, 2021 1:46 pm
ForeverYoung299 says...



Hey! Can u pls review Mr. Quirk(Chapter 1)







If I loved you less, I might be able to talk about it more.
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