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Fri Jul 04, 2014 11:46 pm
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ThereseCricket says...



Hi guys! If you are here to request a review from the Great Cricket then you're in the right place!

What I will review: I will review basically any genre, ( science fiction, fantasy, historical fiction, horror) You name it and I'll review it!

What I won't review: I won't review works that are rated 16+ and over. I also won't review anything that has 5+ fab reviews on it. If you think your work needs another-due to poor quality- then I will review it. Also won't review poetry anymore. Sorry, but I suck at reviewing poetry. :D

I also retain the right to refuse a request if pressed for time, or such like problems.

What you probably should expect: I usually try and make my reviews an even plane. So I'll do grammar nitpicks, style, fluency, plot holes,(sometimes), poor word choice occasionally redundancy, and repetition.. I basically try to get everything I can!

Thanks!
Last edited by ThereseCricket on Fri Feb 06, 2015 9:20 pm, edited 3 times in total.
In Truth Unity,
In Doubt Liberty,
In all things Charity.
  





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Tue Jul 08, 2014 3:56 pm
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Cithara says...



Hey Therese! I have a poem for you:
The Light
Pax in Christo


"My heart is racing even as I write,
but I plan to go on as bravely as a heroine in a
novel."~The Hired Girl


I used to be Thewriter13
  





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Thu Jul 10, 2014 2:10 pm
ThereseCricket says...



Done! Who's next? :D
In Truth Unity,
In Doubt Liberty,
In all things Charity.
  





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Thu Jul 10, 2014 10:07 pm
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NerdBird says...



Hi there there's! I would love it if yout could review my first chapter Found please! :) Found
  





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Fri Jul 11, 2014 10:02 pm
ThereseCricket says...



Completed! Anybody?
In Truth Unity,
In Doubt Liberty,
In all things Charity.
  





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Fri Jul 11, 2014 10:18 pm
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Cithara says...



Hee hee I have yet another: Change?
Pax in Christo


"My heart is racing even as I write,
but I plan to go on as bravely as a heroine in a
novel."~The Hired Girl


I used to be Thewriter13
  





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Sun Jul 13, 2014 6:42 am
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IamTraunt says...



Hey, Therese! I know you said you would, but can you take a look at some poems for me ;)
I appreciate it. Thanks.
Before you judge me...
Make sure you're perfect.


"Good friends, good books, and a sleepy conscience: this is the ideal life.”
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Sun Jul 13, 2014 6:34 pm
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ThereseCricket says...



Completed Change! Who's next?

Will do @IamTraunt!
In Truth Unity,
In Doubt Liberty,
In all things Charity.
  





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Sun Jul 13, 2014 6:43 pm
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IamTraunt says...



Thanks, Therese ;) you're the best!
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Make sure you're perfect.


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Mon Jul 14, 2014 9:28 pm
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NerdBird says...



Hi there! Id love it if you could review my REVISED chapter based on all current comments!
Thank you!
The Shifties Chapter 1 - Found - REVISED
  





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Sun Jul 20, 2014 3:52 pm
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IamTraunt says...



Hey, Therese, me again.
Could you possibly review:
A) The Silent Game
B) My name is Kelly-Marie and I'm a murderer
I know you will do an awesome job ;)
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Sun Jul 20, 2014 7:05 pm
ThereseCricket says...



Sure @IamTraunt! Will do today! :D
In Truth Unity,
In Doubt Liberty,
In all things Charity.
  





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Sun Jul 20, 2014 7:13 pm
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IamTraunt says...



Thanks, Therese! You're awesome!
Before you judge me...
Make sure you're perfect.


"Good friends, good books, and a sleepy conscience: this is the ideal life.”
― Mark Twain




  





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Sun Jul 20, 2014 7:50 pm
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alexandertomasin says...



Hey Therese, I've got here my first work this year. I guess I will integrate it in something else at some point because it lacks introduction and ending, but I'll let you be the judge of it if you will. :)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=113857
  





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Fri Aug 01, 2014 1:27 pm
ThereseCricket says...



Done! Next?
In Truth Unity,
In Doubt Liberty,
In all things Charity.
  








Dogs love their friends and bite their enemies, quite unlike people, who are incapable of pure love and always have to mix love and hate.
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