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Fri Jul 04, 2014 11:46 pm
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ThereseCricket says...



Hi guys! If you are here to request a review from the Great Cricket then you're in the right place!

What I will review: I will review basically any genre, ( science fiction, fantasy, historical fiction, horror) You name it and I'll review it!

What I won't review: I won't review works that are rated 16+ and over. I also won't review anything that has 5+ fab reviews on it. If you think your work needs another-due to poor quality- then I will review it. Also won't review poetry anymore. Sorry, but I suck at reviewing poetry. :D

I also retain the right to refuse a request if pressed for time, or such like problems.

What you probably should expect: I usually try and make my reviews an even plane. So I'll do grammar nitpicks, style, fluency, plot holes,(sometimes), poor word choice occasionally redundancy, and repetition.. I basically try to get everything I can!

Thanks!
Last edited by ThereseCricket on Fri Feb 06, 2015 9:20 pm, edited 3 times in total.
In Truth Unity,
In Doubt Liberty,
In all things Charity.
  





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Tue Jul 08, 2014 3:56 pm
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Cithara says...



Hey Therese! I have a poem for you:
The Light
Pax in Christo


"My heart is racing even as I write,
but I plan to go on as bravely as a heroine in a
novel."~The Hired Girl


I used to be Thewriter13
  





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Thu Jul 10, 2014 2:10 pm
ThereseCricket says...



Done! Who's next? :D
In Truth Unity,
In Doubt Liberty,
In all things Charity.
  





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Thu Jul 10, 2014 10:07 pm
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NerdBird says...



Hi there there's! I would love it if yout could review my first chapter Found please! :) Found
  





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Fri Jul 11, 2014 10:02 pm
ThereseCricket says...



Completed! Anybody?
In Truth Unity,
In Doubt Liberty,
In all things Charity.
  





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Fri Jul 11, 2014 10:18 pm
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Cithara says...



Hee hee I have yet another: Change?
Pax in Christo


"My heart is racing even as I write,
but I plan to go on as bravely as a heroine in a
novel."~The Hired Girl


I used to be Thewriter13
  





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Sun Jul 13, 2014 6:42 am
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IamTraunt says...



Hey, Therese! I know you said you would, but can you take a look at some poems for me ;)
I appreciate it. Thanks.
Before you judge me...
Make sure you're perfect.


"Good friends, good books, and a sleepy conscience: this is the ideal life.”
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Sun Jul 13, 2014 6:34 pm
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ThereseCricket says...



Completed Change! Who's next?

Will do @IamTraunt!
In Truth Unity,
In Doubt Liberty,
In all things Charity.
  





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Sun Jul 13, 2014 6:43 pm
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IamTraunt says...



Thanks, Therese ;) you're the best!
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Make sure you're perfect.


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Mon Jul 14, 2014 9:28 pm
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NerdBird says...



Hi there! Id love it if you could review my REVISED chapter based on all current comments!
Thank you!
The Shifties Chapter 1 - Found - REVISED
  





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Sun Jul 20, 2014 3:52 pm
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IamTraunt says...



Hey, Therese, me again.
Could you possibly review:
A) The Silent Game
B) My name is Kelly-Marie and I'm a murderer
I know you will do an awesome job ;)
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Sun Jul 20, 2014 7:05 pm
ThereseCricket says...



Sure @IamTraunt! Will do today! :D
In Truth Unity,
In Doubt Liberty,
In all things Charity.
  





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Sun Jul 20, 2014 7:13 pm
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IamTraunt says...



Thanks, Therese! You're awesome!
Before you judge me...
Make sure you're perfect.


"Good friends, good books, and a sleepy conscience: this is the ideal life.”
― Mark Twain




  





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Sun Jul 20, 2014 7:50 pm
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alexandertomasin says...



Hey Therese, I've got here my first work this year. I guess I will integrate it in something else at some point because it lacks introduction and ending, but I'll let you be the judge of it if you will. :)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=113857
  





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Fri Aug 01, 2014 1:27 pm
ThereseCricket says...



Done! Next?
In Truth Unity,
In Doubt Liberty,
In all things Charity.
  








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