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Sat Jun 21, 2014 3:58 pm
Morrigan says...



Welcome to the dungeon.

The reviews I will leave will not be nice and sugar coated. If you are looking for an honest opinion on your poetry or your song lyrics, this is the place.

I might suggest that you cut out entire limbs of your piece, or even rearrange its teeth. But you'll feel much better for it afterwards.

I will state it again: I will be brutally honest within these requested reviews. If you don't want that, don't request here.
"So many poems growing outta them they're practically a poet-tree"
Gringoamericano
  





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Sun Aug 03, 2014 5:03 pm
Vervain says...



valley of a thousand winds - Please kill it. With fire, if necessary.
stay off the faerie paths
  








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