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Tue Nov 24, 2015 5:05 pm
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BlueSunset says...



Hey, I was wondering if you could review my new poem? Thanks! :D

if only
busy throwing
words around

like a magician
casting spells.
  





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Fri Dec 11, 2015 2:57 pm
Lightsong says...



Hey! Please review this subchapter of mine, Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 6.2 - Intermission]! Thanks! :D

Just saw the rules. Sorry. I cancel my request.
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Mon Dec 21, 2015 2:14 pm
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Lightsong says...



Alas! I come here for a request! Please review Bookstore Boy! :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Mon Mar 28, 2016 2:56 pm
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Lightsong says...



Hey! Please review The Soft Leaves and Sharp Thorns! Thanksies! :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Tue Mar 29, 2016 5:30 pm
RubyRed says...



Hey Pomp! This is so cool! Would you be so kind as to review my novel for me? The Heart of a Warrior ch. 1 Thanks! :D
You can't blame the writer for what the characters say.
— Truman Capote

Review link below!
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Knight of the Green Room
  





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Fri Apr 01, 2016 11:33 am
Lightsong says...



Since I'm immensely grateful for your recent review, I'd like to request again. Please review The Beeping Sound! Thanks! :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Sun Apr 03, 2016 4:03 am
seeminglymeaningless says...



Hi :) I've started a cross-over fanfiction between Harry Potter and Twilight. If that fits in the realm that'd you'd read, I'd love a review of your caliber.

Augury Academy
I have an approximate knowledge of many things.
  





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Fri Apr 08, 2016 5:42 pm
InfiniteRectangles says...



Hi! I was wondering if you could review my poem for me? Desolate It's based off of "The Road" by Cormac McCarthy, but even if you have't read the book you can still follow what's happening. It just has the same setting as "The Road".
"We are, as a species, addicted to story. Even when the body goes to sleep, the mind stays up all night, telling itself stories" ~Jonathan Gottschall
  





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Fri Apr 15, 2016 5:05 pm
Sujana says...



I need to get this out of the green room real quick, unfortunately. I'd be utterly grateful if you could assist me, just for a moment.

The Thing with Wings
"For with much wisdom comes much sorrow; the more knowledge, the more grief."

Ecclesiastes 1: 18
  





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Mon Apr 18, 2016 7:34 pm
JediDeadpool says...



He really does. You must help the poor tyke
Sincerely,
A Humble YWS User.


I'm writing a book. I've got the page numbers done.
~ Steven Wright ~


Every cat ish my little dark knight<3

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Sun Jun 19, 2016 7:51 am
Lightsong says...



The Last Light Companion [Chapter 1.0]

Please review this for me! :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  








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