Hi I've started a cross-over fanfiction between Harry Potter and Twilight. If that fits in the realm that'd you'd read, I'd love a review of your caliber.
Hi! I was wondering if you could review my poem for me? Desolate It's based off of "The Road" by Cormac McCarthy, but even if you have't read the book you can still follow what's happening. It just has the same setting as "The Road".
"We are, as a species, addicted to story. Even when the body goes to sleep, the mind stays up all night, telling itself stories" ~Jonathan Gottschall
No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it. — LCDR Geordi La Forge
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