[Disclaimer: the reviews may be from kindness, but they will still contain constructive criticism, which may not be taken as "kindness," but it should help you to improve your writing, which is kindness.]
These reviews may come from different people, so there's not much to say here as to what we will review.
"Now I realize that there is no righteous path, it’s just people trying to do their best in a world where it is far too easy to do your worst." — Castiel
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