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Wed Dec 17, 2014 2:11 pm
Pretzelstick says...



Please review my story:(Thanks!)
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=117622
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Sun Jan 04, 2015 3:54 pm
LynseyStaggs says...



Hey could you please review this, I'm still going to change a little bit, but it's basically done.

A Not-So-True Story of a Man Named Earl Higgins.

Earl Higgins was forty three
He had good intentions
And a wife named Marie.

He made her breakfast in bed,
washed all her clothes,
and bought wigs for her head.

Marie stayed in the basement,
though he didn't mind.
It was always Earl, who came and who went.

Earl always bought Marie flowers,
and held her hand,
and poor Marie needed help with her showers.

Except for Marie didn't talk,
but Earl couldn't tell,
it was always Earl Higgins that went out to walk.

Earl finally was caught,
and the flowers stopped coming.
It was a waste-- the things that he bought.

No more breakfast in bed,
Because Earl was in prison,
And poor Marie was dead.




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Tue Jan 06, 2015 5:40 pm
Roundsquare says...



Would you please review my story, The Light Doesn't shine Here (The Light Doesn't Shine Here (chapter one))
“Nobody's perfect. Well, there was this one guy, but we killed him....”
  





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Mon Jan 26, 2015 7:45 pm
Stormcrow says...



Hi there! Ive got a few chapters of a novel posted, but everything but the last chapter (Chapter 22 of The Token) has been reviewed, but you can look at whatever you like! I don't mind! I know it is scifi; is that okay? You didn't specify about wether you would do science stuff.... :D :pirate3: :smt003
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