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Young Writers Society


Will Review Poetry and short stories!



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Sun Apr 20, 2014 5:18 pm
Milanimo says...



Post a link to any poems or short stories you would like me to read. Make sure to post the title, and/or any descriptions or things you would like me to know. Message me for any questions!

I would say my best thing to critique is grammar and figurative language, and fantasy is not always my strongest genre.

Heres two of my reviews to see if you would like my feedback:

Dreamcatcher

What have I done?
  





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Sun Apr 20, 2014 7:27 pm
retrodisco666 says...



Shotgun kisses.

Hey If you could review this poem for me it would be greatly appreciated. Just any feedback in general would be great.
'I have loved to the point of madness, which for me is the only true way to love'
~Francoise Sagan
  








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— Kate Chopin, The Awakening