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Sat Apr 19, 2014 1:48 am
WillowPaw1 says...



Hey!

I review anything but lyrics. Sorry. Just can't do it.

I review:
- Chapters (post your first chapter if I haven't reviewed it yet)
- Short poems
- Short stories
- Essays (not as good but I can try)

I'll review anything up to 16+ language + violence, but nothing higher.


Okay, start requesting! If I don't review it in a week, send me a message on my wall to remind me.
Last edited by WillowPaw1 on Sat Jun 14, 2014 5:32 pm, edited 5 times in total.
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Sat Apr 19, 2014 2:43 am
deleted30 says...



You're welcome to check out anything in my portfolio (don't worry, there's no lyrics). Also, you can find the first chapter of my novel, Vampiric, here (warning: it's pretty terrible). :D
  





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Sat Apr 19, 2014 3:03 am
WillowPaw1 says...



I'll go check some of it out!! :)
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Sat Apr 19, 2014 1:33 pm
Certainly Love says...



Kiss the Damsel Chapter One :)
Sincerely, Amanda R. Holden, Author of Azyea's GIfts
  





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Sat Apr 19, 2014 5:53 pm
WillowPaw1 says...



@CertainlyLove Done!

@Lucrezia Done a couple! whenever I'm bored I can review more. :)
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Thu May 01, 2014 10:43 am
gauravkundu32 says...



Hi there! Please review this new chapter Diakrino- The Darkness within (chapter 4) Thanks.
Always Hope for the BEST
  





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Thu May 01, 2014 7:36 pm
Spotswood says...



Just did a complete overhaul of this Random, Possibly Cliched, but then Again, Possibly Original, High Fantasy Epic Prologue (with the pointless love poem since removed)
"Often, the best way to improve is swallowing your ego and realizing you're a terrible writer in all aspects of writing, then working to improve it."
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Sat May 03, 2014 1:36 am
WillowPaw1 says...



@Spotswood Done! :)

@gauravkundu32 Done as well! :)
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Wed Jun 18, 2014 10:49 pm
BellaRoma says...



Hi. I'm relatively new here so I haven't had many reviews. Could you review my chapter 'Mercy' please.
I apologise that I don't know how to make a link work so you'll have to click my username instead.
Thanks
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Mon Jul 07, 2014 6:31 pm
SereneSimpliciT says...



LAPIS :The Introduction: I hope you enjoy :)
You be you, and I'll be me
  





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Mon Jul 07, 2014 8:38 pm
Lefty says...



Hey there! Would you mind reviewing the first chapter of my book?

You can find it here: The Fighter of Aldea - Chapter 1

Thanks!

-Lefty
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Mon Jul 07, 2014 11:59 pm
WillowPaw1 says...



@LeftyWriter @SereneSimpliciT

I'll try to get to the ASAP - I've got camp to go to this whole week, so it may take a while. But do not fear, your review will be there soon!
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Tue Jul 08, 2014 12:04 am
Lefty says...



No worries! Whenever you have time. :)
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Thu Apr 21, 2016 9:53 pm
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Ya :) :) :) :) :)
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