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I would be so grateful if you could take a look at one or both of my newest poems:

Untitled No. 1
absolution

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks so much!

Sorry if it takes me a while to get to these works. I'm a bit busy right now. I'll definitely try to as soon as I can!

Reviving this thread cuz I need to review some things. Please give me stuff!

Could you review the first three chapters of my story (sorry, if that's a lot) Dreaded Dinner Party Chapter 1?

I'd be happy to, @Dest!

*goes off to review*

C.B. - Episode 000 ← @Lucrezia Here comes a wild review request! Just wrote this piece yesterday and got a few reviews on it already, but I need as many different opinions as possible, so here's to hope your schedule allows yours to fly by as well!

Untitled (Zombie Apocalypse Romance Short) this maybe? Thank you!

Would like for you to review my "story"/letter - Letter to a dead girl.

Hi. I really wanted an honest review for my article. The link is:

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Aaraju/An-Unfulfilled-Dream-135138

Thank you very much.

Hey Lucy. You think you could maybe take a look at "Shattered Crowns"? There are eight chapters so far, plus a synopsis/outline of the entire plot.

"Shattered Crowns" in depth synopsis

The Carpenter - Exordium of Shattered Crowns

Sally - Chapter One of Shattered Crowns

Wylfred - Chapter Two of Shattered Crowns

The Duchess - Chapter Three of Shattered Crowns

The King of Winter - Chapter Four of Shattered Crowns

Daegar - Chapter Five of Shattered Crowns

The Third Son - Chapter Six of Shattered Crowns

Son of the Black - Chapter Seven of Shattered Crowns

Note: My chapters are relatively long, so be warned.

@Tortwag
@Dracula
@shima
@Aaraju
@CarryOnMrCaulfield

Hey guys!

Sorry that I never reviewed your stuff; I took a hiatus from the site a little while before you posted your links, and at the time that I vanished, I only had one recent post in this thread and wasn't expecting any more (boy, was I wrong!). Anyway, since I'm currently in between jobs (or in other words, an unemployed bum), it seems like a good time for me to get to work reviewing! *cracks knuckles* I hope that's okay.

TL;DR: I didn't see these posts till just now, and I will be belatedly reviewing all of them ASAP. Sorry for the delay!

@Lucrezia Why yes! Of course it's okay! The delay is... Well it's not fine, but Life is Life, so, I'm fine with the hiatus. At the very least, I hope you'll enjoy yourself with all of these! Good luck :3

Tortwag wrote:@Lucrezia Why yes! Of course it's okay! The delay is... Well it's not fine, but Life is Life, so, I'm fine with the hiatus. At the very least, I hope you'll enjoy yourself with all of these! Good luck :3

Thanks for understanding! And I just completed your review.

This one needs reviews: Dying country

Hey, could you review Seltas's first kill I promise it's not gorry! I personly hate reading that kind of stuff... and don't worry about being nice when reviewing this. No feelings will be hurt I promise.
Thanks in advance.